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Dark Woods 1

DARK WOODS

What use is this effusiveness
over and above the persistent voices
words can’t be axes that fell
 this lush darkness. This is
 another removal from boredom
could  also be a rarified racial totem
 refusing to fade from the air
this display of green exuberance
is because bareness just can’t weep
its tangled space ever set on
a tryst with a rare resonance
shedding is the language of grief
shades of dark  its sacred brief
where shadows stay stunned
laying trust in the  dark. Not in
a foreboding cluster of lit-up words.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/7/2012 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win in Brian Strand 's "Whatever Again" contest Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2012 2:56:00 PM
Congrats, Jag. Awesome piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. Best to you and yours. Ralph
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Date: 2/5/2012 10:15:00 PM
congrats Jag on HM luv.. for this brilliant beauty and creation of poetic art.. hope your weekend was bright andf beautiful as your words ..luv..
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Date: 2/5/2012 9:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest
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Date: 2/5/2012 8:48:00 PM
Congrats on your placement! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 1/24/2012 7:09:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments on my writings Jag. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/24/2012 12:59:00 AM
I can follow your thoughts and am a lil' bit stunned with it. you have an profoundness wanting to break free. very strong poetry
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Date: 1/16/2012 6:04:00 PM
very deep, just like those deep dark woods of which you speak. It should have been in that Dark woods contest a while back!!
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Date: 1/12/2012 8:53:00 PM
S.J.N., how are you???? a very poetic trail... love it... nice shade..always,..p.d.
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S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 1/13/2012 8:26:00 AM
Fine, p.d, thanks..hope all is well there, jag

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