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Dark Tidings

When wind whips high in the night Shrilling it's loneliness Or the cold grey curl of the fog Follows me through the streets Terror is my name, as the asphalt trembles And I land on your doorstop, With horror at your rumpled feet In this day's dole of happenings I triumph over those who fear My cloven hooves of tidings So far from the spot where horror Lies fused in common planetary chaos With no one knowing the end...the time or place Before your eyes...recognize my form I speak with deceit mixed with truth What is real...? Consider me depraved The bannered headline, I go on record For news now looms in startled silhouette Look at this new day, look gravely in it's face Futile those who evict a glance To edit me, without chance to erase my lies It looks back from a mirror eye to eye Some equinox of destiny That slithers back to hither...slime or shame It has come to pass, somewhere... Will it come here on your street? Do you wish to escape, your name in black? What slithers, darkly, to bedevil you... What creeps inside your peace of mind Seen darkly in the daily news

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/26/2010 7:23:00 AM
wonderfully written Carrie... congrats
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Date: 5/26/2010 12:31:00 AM
Congratulations, Carrie, on your success in the Dark Poet Contest sponsored by, SKAT a k a Irma, with this unique poem. Your poetic skills shine in this venue, too...without the gore. Excellent write! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 5/23/2010 7:08:00 PM
Very fine Carrie and congrats on your victory with this poem in The Dark Poet... I don't think my dark side came through too well.. Irma told me it was still too "sweet"..haha... congrats and enjoy...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/23/2010 11:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Carrie. I love the emotion and the honesty of this mysterious poem. Enjoy your new glory and honor. Love and hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 5/22/2010 7:21:00 AM
How are things on the "Dark Side", Carry? It would seem, OK!...Congratulations!
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Date: 5/21/2010 5:11:00 PM
Oh, creepy ,, well done Carrie. i loved this contest. congrats on your succes..Bg
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Date: 5/21/2010 2:40:00 PM
Congratulations, Carrie, you scored with our dark lady too!!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/21/2010 12:03:00 PM
U HAD ME AT THIS LINE THE MOST-(My cloven hooves of tidings)- DID ALOT WITH THAT TWIST. A FINE DARK POEM, CONGRATS FOR U ,,SKAT
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Date: 5/21/2010 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in "The Dark Poet" contest sponsored by S K A T. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2010 7:07:00 PM
Good luck with contest with this Carrie. I'm not a fan of dark poetry and hae never written any, so will skip thes contest. Thank you for your kind words and congratulations on your first place. Love, joyce
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Date: 5/19/2010 4:54:00 PM
Yes, let's call you the demon of gloom, Carrie. Good job with this contest. I just don't have time to do anything but I guess I could enter a fun suicide poem? haha. So glad to see your writings again. I hope I can catch up with all the comments I have. LUv ya, Andrea
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Date: 5/19/2010 3:17:00 PM
And that is exactly why I stopped watching news, current events... always death, and war... and dispicible things we do everyday. Argh.. it is scary, sad, and just.. so much evil in the world. I really like how you portrayed this.
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Date: 5/19/2010 3:13:00 PM
Nice one- GL in the contest!
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Date: 5/19/2010 2:23:00 PM
That news everyday can ruin our peace of mind for sure...That newspaper can ruin it for everyone...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 5/19/2010 12:46:00 PM
Very deep, Carrie! Indeed, the "daily news" is filled with unimaginable horrors. I best slither back into my cave and hide my face. Best wishes for the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/19/2010 11:11:00 AM
ah mystery which adds to fear which reins the dark, good luck :D
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Date: 5/19/2010 10:25:00 AM
Carrie - this is a deliciously dark piece of work. Many regards Janette
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Date: 5/19/2010 10:21:00 AM
It looks back from a mirror eye to eye... My favorite line. We truly are the only things we need to fear. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us.
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