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Dark Side of Oakleys Premiere Contest Winner

Dark side of Oakleys. The black, short linen dress, floats and careses her thighs, a moition so sweet! In the eveloping heat. Fine african beads, dance loose on dark skin, caress the breasts above from a heart beat within. She sways, and he staggers In a moment he stands amongst all the sand that has fallen, and crumbled off the sandcastle Man.

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Date: 9/21/2022 7:56:00 AM
Strong images of sensual desire on a sandy shore. Terrific final 4 lines that shift focus to your Sandcastle Man. Congratulations! Brian
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John Lusardi
Date: 9/29/2022 11:21:00 AM
Many thanks on your observance of this short write. Its much valued Brian.
Date: 9/14/2022 7:36:00 AM
Wow! What a scenic and picturesque work! Congratulations!
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John Lusardi
Date: 9/29/2022 11:25:00 AM
Thank you
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John Lusardi
Date: 9/29/2022 11:24:00 AM
Many thanks, your comment is much appreciated
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John Lusardi
Date: 9/29/2022 11:22:00 AM
Many thanks, your comment is much appreciated
Date: 9/10/2022 3:41:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work you have penned in this one. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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John Lusardi
Date: 9/10/2022 8:43:00 PM
Thank you, for your comment. It is much appreciated.

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