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Dark Rain

Earth with parched lips
Elixir falls from heaven
Nature's beauty in bloom

Banks pregnant in awe
Accepts the furious dark raindrops
Havoc unfolded

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Sara Kendrick

February 6, 2011 at 4:15 PM

Congratulations on your win.Sara

Kory Calhoun

January 24, 2011 at 6:15 AM

Hi Tahera - Congratulations on your WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC

Eiken Laan

January 22, 2011 at 5:12 AM

Lovely images here, really feel the beauty.

Christine A Kysely

January 21, 2011 at 9:41 AM

Really Beautiful! Congratulations!!! Christine

The Situation

January 18, 2011 at 7:34 PM

congradulations on your win. T. S.

Carol Fillmore

January 18, 2011 at 3:11 PM

Great images, particularly like 'earth with parched lips', I see this vividly! Excellent piece, Tahera. Thanks for your comment on my recent post, "A January Night", much appreciated. Carol

Andrea Dietrich

January 17, 2011 at 7:25 PM

Tahera, I am seeing so many tremendous wins tonight. YOURS included!! The first one is my fav! Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 17, 2011 at 2:22 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Tahera

James Fraser

January 17, 2011 at 12:46 PM

Beauty blending into a terrific message Tahera. Mega congratulations on your win in Skat's fine contest....:)

Audrey Haick

January 17, 2011 at 11:11 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contes, Tahera. Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 17, 2011 at 5:52 AM

Congrats Tahera my friend on your stunning success in the Dark Rain contest with this vibrant entry... enjoy the top ten victory today with luv ... your talent shines luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 17, 2011 at 5:41 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Tahera, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

January 17, 2011 at 4:06 AM

Tahera, congratulations on your awesome win in Irma's contest, love Wilma

Kash Poet

January 17, 2011 at 3:14 AM

Congrats Tahera on your win with this beautiful Haiku!

Carolyn Devonshire

January 17, 2011 at 1:30 AM

You did an excellent job with the "dark rain" theme, Tahera. Excellent use of imagery. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Noel Villarosa

January 16, 2011 at 11:53 PM

Congratulations, Tahera on your well deserved win for this contest. (^_^) Noel.

Skat A

January 16, 2011 at 9:30 PM

Congratulations, Tahera !thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT

Robert Pettit

January 16, 2011 at 8:43 PM

A good pair of haiku poems that complement each other very well.

John Freeman

January 15, 2011 at 10:14 AM

Beautifully written Haiku, Tahera! Two correlated thoughts with a punch line explanation! Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

January 14, 2011 at 11:13 PM

oh my, a picture painted with pastel and dark colors, tahera.. radiant!! much luck in the contest! :) nette

Poet Destroyer A

January 14, 2011 at 10:55 PM

awesome Tahera, beauty mixed with dark,.. good luck,, p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

January 14, 2011 at 8:21 PM

Well, on is nature and one is the nature of banks! very clever, Tahara. I am thinking of posting my little set soon. WAsn't this fun, to do dark rain? Luv, Andrea

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