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Dark Rain

Earth with parched lips
Elixir falls from heaven
Nature's beauty in bloom

Banks pregnant in awe
Accepts the furious dark raindrops
Havoc unfolded

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2011 4:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win.Sara

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/24/2011 6:15:00 AM

Hi Tahera - Congratulations on your WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/22/2011 5:12:00 AM

Lovely images here, really feel the beauty.

Christine A Kysely

Date: 1/21/2011 9:41:00 AM

Really Beautiful! Congratulations!!! Christine

The Situation

Date: 1/18/2011 7:34:00 PM

congradulations on your win. T. S.

Carol Fillmore

Date: 1/18/2011 3:11:00 PM

Great images, particularly like 'earth with parched lips', I see this vividly! Excellent piece, Tahera. Thanks for your comment on my recent post, "A January Night", much appreciated. Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2011 7:25:00 PM

Tahera, I am seeing so many tremendous wins tonight. YOURS included!! The first one is my fav! Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/17/2011 2:22:00 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Tahera

James Fraser

Date: 1/17/2011 12:46:00 PM

Beauty blending into a terrific message Tahera. Mega congratulations on your win in Skat's fine contest....:)

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/17/2011 11:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contes, Tahera. Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/17/2011 5:52:00 AM

Congrats Tahera my friend on your stunning success in the Dark Rain contest with this vibrant entry... enjoy the top ten victory today with luv ... your talent shines luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 5:41:00 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Tahera, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/17/2011 4:06:00 AM

Tahera, congratulations on your awesome win in Irma's contest, love Wilma

Kash Poet

Date: 1/17/2011 3:14:00 AM

Congrats Tahera on your win with this beautiful Haiku!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/17/2011 1:30:00 AM

You did an excellent job with the "dark rain" theme, Tahera. Excellent use of imagery. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Noel Villarosa

Date: 1/16/2011 11:53:00 PM

Congratulations, Tahera on your well deserved win for this contest. (^_^) Noel.

Skat A

Date: 1/16/2011 9:30:00 PM

Congratulations, Tahera !thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/16/2011 8:43:00 PM

A good pair of haiku poems that complement each other very well.

John Freeman

Date: 1/15/2011 10:14:00 AM

Beautifully written Haiku, Tahera! Two correlated thoughts with a punch line explanation! Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/14/2011 11:13:00 PM

oh my, a picture painted with pastel and dark colors, tahera.. radiant!! much luck in the contest! :) nette

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2011 10:55:00 PM

awesome Tahera, beauty mixed with dark,.. good luck,, p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2011 8:21:00 PM

Well, on is nature and one is the nature of banks! very clever, Tahara. I am thinking of posting my little set soon. WAsn't this fun, to do dark rain? Luv, Andrea

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