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dark rain

the darkest rain comes when you realize your a fool that you've just been used

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/30/2011 5:11:00 AM
no doubt about it ..that sure do hurt .. mais C'est la vie des fois. Congrats on your big win. Enjoyed your unique Haiku.
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Date: 1/24/2011 6:02:00 AM
Hi TS - I liked this one. Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/21/2011 4:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fine work..Sara
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Date: 1/20/2011 2:35:00 PM
Lots of good verse, not haiku but MOST excellent, and so true! Congrad's on this gem. Light & Love
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Date: 1/20/2011 1:26:00 PM
Just wanted to add my congratulations on your well-earned win in the contest, TS. Way to go! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/18/2011 7:31:00 PM
congrats! situation...a day late & a $-short....been there.....jimbo
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Date: 1/17/2011 7:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your unique entry. I much enjoyed!
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:52:00 PM
Wow!!!!Love this Haiku. Congratulations on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:13:00 PM
Congratulationsn onn the second place win in the contest, The Situation
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Date: 1/17/2011 11:45:00 AM
Many congrats on your win in Skat's contest. Interesting take....:)
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Date: 1/17/2011 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful Haiku. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 1/17/2011 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your fantastic win in the contest! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/17/2011 5:37:00 AM
Congrats Situation on your fabulous win in the Dark Rain contest with this fantastic entry .. enjoy your top tenner today with luv..
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Date: 1/17/2011 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest The Situation, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2011 3:50:00 AM
Well done my friend...excellent write and win...
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Date: 1/17/2011 3:26:00 AM
Absolutely stunning!! Congratulations on your awesome win in Irma's contest :)
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:19:00 AM
This one is something different!Wonderful!Congrats!
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Date: 1/16/2011 9:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/16/2011 9:22:00 PM
Hi! Situation,,Congratulations, on your dark rain entry! yes a fool, comes with rain at the end!! thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT
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Date: 1/15/2011 8:32:00 AM
Oh, this is a very clever take on the contest, T.S. And it's sooo true. You have a winner here for sure. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/15/2011 8:10:00 AM
Bitter this rain...I'm sure you'll come up with something good later, "what doesn't kill me, makes me stronger" (Nietzsche).
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Date: 1/14/2011 2:41:00 PM
I know exactly how that feels, these clouds over me just won't go away. I think the black rain in my way has to do with, me being a fool.. enjoyed your haiku... p.d.
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