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Dark Rain

the darkest rain comes
when you realize your a fool
that you've just been used

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Robert A. Dufresne

January 30, 2011 at 5:11 AM

no doubt about it ..that sure do hurt .. mais C'est la vie des fois. Congrats on your big win. Enjoyed your unique Haiku.

Kory Calhoun

January 24, 2011 at 6:02 AM

Hi TS - I liked this one. Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC

Sara Kendrick

January 21, 2011 at 4:43 PM

Congratulations on your win with this fine work..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

January 20, 2011 at 2:35 PM

Lots of good verse, not haiku but MOST excellent, and so true! Congrad's on this gem. Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

January 20, 2011 at 1:26 PM

Just wanted to add my congratulations on your well-earned win in the contest, TS. Way to go! Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff

January 18, 2011 at 7:31 PM

congrats! situation...a day late & a $-short....been there.....jimbo

Andrea Dietrich

January 17, 2011 at 7:12 PM

Congratulations on your unique entry. I much enjoyed!

Elaine George

January 17, 2011 at 4:52 PM

Wow!!!!Love this Haiku. Congratulations on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 17, 2011 at 2:13 PM

Congratulationsn onn the second place win in the contest, The Situation

James Fraser

January 17, 2011 at 11:45 AM

Many congrats on your win in Skat's contest. Interesting take....:)

Caryl Muzzey

January 17, 2011 at 11:11 AM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful Haiku. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Audrey Haick

January 17, 2011 at 11:01 AM

Congratulations on your fantastic win in the contest! Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 17, 2011 at 5:37 AM

Congrats Situation on your fabulous win in the Dark Rain contest with this fantastic entry .. enjoy your top tenner today with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 17, 2011 at 5:31 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest The Situation, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

January 17, 2011 at 3:50 AM

Well done my friend...excellent write and win...

Wilma Neels

January 17, 2011 at 3:26 AM

Absolutely stunning!! Congratulations on your awesome win in Irma's contest :)

Kash Poet

January 17, 2011 at 2:19 AM

This one is something different!Wonderful!Congrats!

Joyce Johnson

January 16, 2011 at 9:27 PM

Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Skat A

January 16, 2011 at 9:22 PM

Hi! Situation,,Congratulations, on your dark rain entry! yes a fool, comes with rain at the end!! thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT

Carolyn Devonshire

January 15, 2011 at 8:32 AM

Oh, this is a very clever take on the contest, T.S. And it's sooo true. You have a winner here for sure. Love, Carolyn

Mirela Petalli

January 15, 2011 at 8:10 AM

Bitter this rain...I'm sure you'll come up with something good later, "what doesn't kill me, makes me stronger" (Nietzsche).

Poet Destroyer A

January 14, 2011 at 2:41 PM

I know exactly how that feels, these clouds over me just won't go away. I think the black rain in my way has to do with, me being a fool.. enjoyed your haiku... p.d.

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