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Dark Rain

the darkest rain comes when you realize your a fool that you've just been used

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/30/2011 5:11:00 AM

no doubt about it ..that sure do hurt .. mais C'est la vie des fois. Congrats on your big win. Enjoyed your unique Haiku.

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/24/2011 6:02:00 AM

Hi TS - I liked this one. Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2011 4:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this fine work..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/20/2011 2:35:00 PM

Lots of good verse, not haiku but MOST excellent, and so true! Congrad's on this gem. Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/20/2011 1:26:00 PM

Just wanted to add my congratulations on your well-earned win in the contest, TS. Way to go! Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff

Date: 1/18/2011 7:31:00 PM

congrats! situation...a day late & a $-short....been there.....jimbo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2011 7:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your unique entry. I much enjoyed!

Elaine George

Date: 1/17/2011 4:52:00 PM

Wow!!!!Love this Haiku. Congratulations on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/17/2011 2:13:00 PM

Congratulationsn onn the second place win in the contest, The Situation

James Fraser

Date: 1/17/2011 11:45:00 AM

Many congrats on your win in Skat's contest. Interesting take....:)

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 1/17/2011 11:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful Haiku. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/17/2011 11:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your fantastic win in the contest! Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/17/2011 5:37:00 AM

Congrats Situation on your fabulous win in the Dark Rain contest with this fantastic entry .. enjoy your top tenner today with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 5:31:00 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest The Situation, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/17/2011 3:50:00 AM

Well done my friend...excellent write and win...

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/17/2011 3:26:00 AM

Absolutely stunning!! Congratulations on your awesome win in Irma's contest :)

Kash Poet

Date: 1/17/2011 2:19:00 AM

This one is something different!Wonderful!Congrats!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/16/2011 9:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Skat A

Date: 1/16/2011 9:22:00 PM

Hi! Situation,,Congratulations, on your dark rain entry! yes a fool, comes with rain at the end!! thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/15/2011 8:32:00 AM

Oh, this is a very clever take on the contest, T.S. And it's sooo true. You have a winner here for sure. Love, Carolyn

Mirela Petalli

Date: 1/15/2011 8:10:00 AM

Bitter this rain...I'm sure you'll come up with something good later, "what doesn't kill me, makes me stronger" (Nietzsche).

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2011 2:41:00 PM

I know exactly how that feels, these clouds over me just won't go away. I think the black rain in my way has to do with, me being a fool.. enjoyed your haiku... p.d.