Dark Prose

A happy little girl. Bright colors and sunshine. She grows older and enters middle 
school. She is teased constantly. Not the right hair. Not the right clothes. It hurts, 
oh God it hurts. She forgoes colors. Black and gray are good enough. She gets older 
and older still. High school; a new place, new adventure. Dare she hope...new 
friends? Foolish, foolish girl. New friends? New enemies...new pain. Dyed hair...what 
color? Black. Black hair, black clothes...black heart. Poetry, music, the only escape. 
Dark, Pain, Despair...Destroyed. Heart bleeding and inside she's screaming. but no 
one sees. No one hears. Alone...so alone. Who would understand? No one. Dying 
inside. Drowning in pain bottled up. Invisible. Misunderstood. Who is she? Who is 
she!?! Screaming, bleeding, dying. What a waste. That's what she is, a waste of 
space, a waste of breath. Better off without her. The world's better off. Despised, 
Destroyed...Death.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pettit Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 4:26 PM
Congratulations on winning in the contest.
Horsman Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 8:23 PM
Glad i've caught up with these excellent winning poems, this is superb, congrats, Angelita. Harry
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 3:41 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Becerra Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Thx to all of you who left comments and to Catie for judging my poem good enough to win. Lots of love!
Sweetheart Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 8:40 AM
Congrats Angelita on your wonderful win in the Dark Prsoe contest with this sensational write and entry.. enjoy your top ten success with luv..
Guzzi Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 1:53 PM
Too many feel this pain and don't fight back, an excellent write. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 2:14 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Angelina
Brown Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 10:16 AM
Congratulations to you for your win Angelita in Catie Lindsey's contest "Dark Prose". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 7:16 PM
Reminds me of those Goths. Certainly dark, this one. Congratulations, Angelita. LUv, Andrea
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