Dark Nostalgia.

A town unlocks their Baptist cage.
They shout and scream unholy rage.
The scorching sun sears all beneath,
Forsaken whips snap from their teeth.
Their eyes are slits that sting of salt.
Born black; born here; it's all his fault.
And what they learned at mothers' knee,
keeps cadence, creaking, from a tree.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 5:49 PM
Very dark nostalgia indeed, Gerard. My! had to come way back to your first poem, I've seen all the ones on current page! Hey I had to look at my limerick again to realize why said you imagined me singing a chorus to a RAy Charles song. It was my Hit the Road Jack line. haha. You are so funny. LUv, Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 3:08 AM
Interesting writing. Sara
Sullivan Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 4:58 PM
Gerard, Congratulations on your well deserved win. All best, Orma
Peranteau Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 9:50 AM
Gerard,..awesome poem,..and congrats on your win ! james
Mason Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 8:28 AM
Brillant write here, Gerard. Don't like the "its all his fault" line though. Maybe in reference to "born here" but never, ever in reference to "born black" ... smile ... can you tell your writing has be going ... LOL ... great selection to be featured this week at the Soup ! Congratulations !!
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 4:07 PM
Congratulations Gerard. Vince
Brown Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 7:21 AM
Congratulations Gerard on your win. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 3:58 AM
Congratulations Gerard on a most excellent and well deserved win! Love, Shar
Strand Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 12:39 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Gerard . Rgds Brian
Tugaff Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 11:53 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem. More power and enjoy your success. Ernilando
Mason Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 10:18 PM
Interesting write here, Gerard. I'm not familar with your writing (there are way too many folks here at the Soup) but I congratulate you on your win in the latest contest!! Hope to read more of your work soon.
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May 31, 2009 at 12:42 PM
Congratulations on your honorable mention in the contest. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 10:37 AM
Gerad, Very interesting and insightful perspective in this rhyme. Congratulations on having your poem, "Dark Nostalgia" featured this week. Keep writing. Always, Dane"
Adeite Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 9:28 AM
My warmest congratulations to you dear on your awesome 9th placement… you are such a wonderful writer… please let your poetry pen keep dancing to the drum beat of your passions and poetrysoup-land. You are great. leke
Fraser Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 7:04 AM
Congratulations on your poem being placed > James
Richards Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 6:41 AM
Congratulations for a winning entry, and well deserved place in the contest !! :)
Scott Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 5:27 AM
Congrats on your win Gerard!
Eggins Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 2:33 AM
This spits in your face well writen i love it (i know that cadence well)lol .. love and light Jayne
Santiago Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 1:05 AM
Congrats to you, Gerard, on your success placing in PS contest, bravo! Ernesto
Strand Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 11:29 PM
Congrats on your success in PS contest.Gerard Rgds Brian
Jordan Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 11:13 PM
Congratulations on Placing Ninth in the Poetry soup contest, MJ
Moreno Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 2:40 PM
Gerard, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Brown Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Gerard. Love, Carol
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