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Dark Nostalgia.

A town unlocks their Baptist cage. They shout and scream unholy rage. The scorching sun sears all beneath, Forsaken whips snap from their teeth. Their eyes are slits that sting of salt. Born black; born here; it's all his fault. And what they learned at mothers' knee, keeps cadence, creaking, from a tree.

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Date: 12/11/2010 5:49:00 PM
Very dark nostalgia indeed, Gerard. My! had to come way back to your first poem, I've seen all the ones on current page! Hey I had to look at my limerick again to realize why said you imagined me singing a chorus to a RAy Charles song. It was my Hit the Road Jack line. haha. You are so funny. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/14/2009 3:08:00 AM
Interesting writing. Sara
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Date: 6/8/2009 4:58:00 PM
Gerard, Congratulations on your well deserved win. All best, Orma
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Date: 6/6/2009 9:50:00 AM
Gerard,..awesome poem,..and congrats on your win ! james
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Date: 6/6/2009 8:28:00 AM
Brillant write here, Gerard. Don't like the "its all his fault" line though. Maybe in reference to "born here" but never, ever in reference to "born black" ... smile ... can you tell your writing has be going ... LOL ... great selection to be featured this week at the Soup ! Congratulations !!
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Date: 6/2/2009 4:07:00 PM
Congratulations Gerard. Vince
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Date: 6/1/2009 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations Gerard on your win. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2009 3:58:00 AM
Congratulations Gerard on a most excellent and well deserved win! Love, Shar
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Date: 6/1/2009 12:39:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Gerard . Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/31/2009 11:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem. More power and enjoy your success. Ernilando
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Date: 5/31/2009 10:18:00 PM
Interesting write here, Gerard. I'm not familar with your writing (there are way too many folks here at the Soup) but I congratulate you on your win in the latest contest!! Hope to read more of your work soon.
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Date: 5/31/2009 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your honorable mention in the contest. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 5/31/2009 10:37:00 AM
Gerad, Very interesting and insightful perspective in this rhyme. Congratulations on having your poem, "Dark Nostalgia" featured this week. Keep writing. Always, Dane"
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Date: 5/31/2009 9:28:00 AM
My warmest congratulations to you dear on your awesome 9th placement… you are such a wonderful writer… please let your poetry pen keep dancing to the drum beat of your passions and poetrysoup-land. You are great. leke
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Date: 5/31/2009 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being placed > James
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Date: 5/31/2009 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations for a winning entry, and well deserved place in the contest !! :)
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Date: 5/31/2009 5:27:00 AM
Congrats on your win Gerard!
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Date: 5/31/2009 2:33:00 AM
This spits in your face well writen i love it (i know that cadence well)lol .. love and light Jayne
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Date: 5/31/2009 1:05:00 AM
Congrats to you, Gerard, on your success placing in PS contest, bravo! Ernesto
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Date: 5/30/2009 11:29:00 PM
Congrats on your success in PS contest.Gerard Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/30/2009 11:13:00 PM
Congratulations on Placing Ninth in the Poetry soup contest, MJ
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Date: 5/3/2009 2:40:00 PM
Gerard, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/10/2009 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Gerard. Love, Carol
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