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Dark Nights

Screams of a Heron Penetrating the dark night Increasing my fear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/22/2017 5:14:00 PM
You express fear by using sound and darkness. Even more, the reader is compelled to wander along with you, perhaps in a desolate, eerie place where danger lurks...! Regards // paul
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Maria Williams
Date: 5/2/2017 9:56:00 PM
I apologise for this late acknowledgement of your excellent interpretation Paul. Much appreciated
Date: 4/22/2017 6:16:00 AM
Wow, I can hear it! Nicely done!
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Date: 5/2/2017 9:55:00 PM
Thanks again Kim and once again I apologize for acknowledging your nice comment so late
Date: 3/17/2017 3:26:00 PM
Right on, Maria. : ) Night-Herons have a fairly wide range of weird sounds to make.
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Maria Williams
Date: 3/17/2017 9:36:00 PM
Thanks Doug, for the visits and the kind comments.
Date: 3/14/2017 7:10:00 AM
Love how you paint a picture with so few words - the sound must be haunting.
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Date: 3/14/2017 10:43:00 PM
Scary enough to keep me awake the whole night, LOl Thank you Agnes
Date: 3/14/2017 12:35:00 AM
That is a very evocative wonderful haiku, in those few words you've perfectly described that sound and what it does to you.
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Date: 3/14/2017 1:08:00 AM
It is a sound that I'll never forget. Thanks for the wisdom Darren