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Dark Nights

Screams of a Heron Penetrating the dark night Increasing my fear

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/22/2017 5:14:00 PM

You express fear by using sound and darkness. Even more, the reader is compelled to wander along with you, perhaps in a desolate, eerie place where danger lurks...! Regards // paul

Maria Williams
Date: 5/2/2017 9:56:00 PM

I apologise for this late acknowledgement of your excellent interpretation Paul. Much appreciated

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/22/2017 6:16:00 AM

Wow, I can hear it! Nicely done!

Maria Williams
Date: 5/2/2017 9:55:00 PM

Thanks again Kim and once again I apologize for acknowledging your nice comment so late

Doug Vinson

Date: 3/17/2017 3:26:00 PM

Right on, Maria. : ) Night-Herons have a fairly wide range of weird sounds to make.

Maria Williams
Date: 3/17/2017 9:36:00 PM

Thanks Doug, for the visits and the kind comments.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/14/2017 7:10:00 AM

Love how you paint a picture with so few words - the sound must be haunting.

Maria Williams
Date: 3/14/2017 10:43:00 PM

Scary enough to keep me awake the whole night, LOl Thank you Agnes

Darren White

Date: 3/14/2017 12:35:00 AM

That is a very evocative wonderful haiku, in those few words you've perfectly described that sound and what it does to you.

Maria Williams
Date: 3/14/2017 1:08:00 AM

It is a sound that I'll never forget. Thanks for the wisdom Darren