Dark Matter Fences

though her lips may smile
an ineffable sadness 
lies behind those eyes

for despite my best
intentions, never would  I 
see them shine for me

tis not a fairy 
tale, our paths must never cross
dark matter fences

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/16/2015 2:09:00 PM
Excellent Senryu
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 11/18/2015 9:59:00 PM
Thanks Nayda
Date: 7/20/2015 5:22:00 AM
Congratulations, Dave! sorry for being late. I'm still catching up. Kim :-)
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/20/2015 7:12:00 AM
Thanks Kim, with summer I quite understand catching up.
Date: 7/4/2015 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/7/2015 1:33:00 PM
Thanks Eve
Date: 7/4/2015 10:49:00 AM
so enjoyable treat! congrats for your win! :)
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/7/2015 1:32:00 PM
Thanks Alyah
Date: 7/4/2015 8:28:00 AM
I enjoyed reading again. Congrats.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/7/2015 1:32:00 PM
Thanks again Richard
Date: 7/4/2015 1:23:00 AM
Congrats Dave!
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/7/2015 1:32:00 PM
Thanks Ed
Date: 7/3/2015 10:55:00 PM
Dave congratulations on your wonderful win
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/4/2015 4:53:00 PM
Thanks BW
Date: 7/3/2015 10:11:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning senryu Dave!
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/4/2015 4:39:00 PM
Thanks Dr.Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 6:46:00 PM
Dave, Congratulations on the win. SKAT
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/3/2015 8:33:00 PM
Thanks again SKAT
Date: 7/3/2015 6:23:00 PM
Dave, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/3/2015 8:33:00 PM
Thanks Linda
Date: 7/3/2015 4:44:00 PM
Nicely done, nicely won. congrats to you.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/3/2015 8:33:00 PM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 7/3/2015 4:25:00 PM
Congrats on your fantastic win, Dave! Love, Kim
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/3/2015 8:32:00 PM
Thanks Kim
Date: 7/3/2015 4:41:00 AM
Nice one Dave!
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/3/2015 8:28:00 PM
Thanks marvin, for your kind words and hosting a most interesting contest.
Date: 7/3/2015 4:41:00 AM
Congratz!!!
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Date: 7/1/2015 12:31:00 AM
thi is deep Dave... SK
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/1/2015 8:57:00 AM
Thanks Skat
Date: 6/30/2015 8:29:00 AM
This is really well done.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/1/2015 8:11:00 AM
Thank you Richard.
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