D.W. Rodgers Poet Senryu

Dark Matter Fences

though her lips may smile
an ineffable sadness 
lies behind those eyes

for despite my best
intentions, never would  I 
see them shine for me

tis not a fairy 
tale, our paths must never cross
dark matter fences

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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 16, 2015 at 2:09 PM Excellent Senryu D.W. Rodgers November 18, 2015 at 9:59 PM Thanks Nayda

Kp Nunez July 20, 2015 at 5:22 AM Congratulations, Dave! sorry for being late. I'm still catching up. Kim :-) D.W. Rodgers July 20, 2015 at 7:12 AM Thanks Kim, with summer I quite understand catching up.

Eve Roper July 4, 2015 at 12:44 PM Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve D.W. Rodgers July 7, 2015 at 1:33 PM Thanks Eve

Aiyah Torres July 4, 2015 at 10:49 AM so enjoyable treat! congrats for your win! :) D.W. Rodgers July 7, 2015 at 1:32 PM Thanks Alyah

Richard Lamoureux July 4, 2015 at 8:28 AM I enjoyed reading again. Congrats. D.W. Rodgers July 7, 2015 at 1:32 PM Thanks again Richard

Edward Ebbs July 4, 2015 at 1:23 AM Congrats Dave! D.W. Rodgers July 7, 2015 at 1:32 PM Thanks Ed

Constance La France July 3, 2015 at 10:55 PM Dave congratulations on your wonderful win D.W. Rodgers July 4, 2015 at 4:53 PM Thanks BW

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 3, 2015 at 10:11 PM Congrats on ur awesome winning senryu Dave! D.W. Rodgers July 4, 2015 at 4:39 PM Thanks Dr.Sharma

Skat A July 3, 2015 at 6:46 PM Dave, Congratulations on the win. SKAT D.W. Rodgers July 3, 2015 at 8:33 PM Thanks again SKAT

Poet Destroyer A July 3, 2015 at 6:23 PM Dave, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA D.W. Rodgers July 3, 2015 at 8:33 PM Thanks Linda

Andrea Dietrich July 3, 2015 at 4:44 PM Nicely done, nicely won. congrats to you. D.W. Rodgers July 3, 2015 at 8:33 PM Thanks Andrea

Kim Merryman July 3, 2015 at 4:25 PM Congrats on your fantastic win, Dave! Love, Kim D.W. Rodgers July 3, 2015 at 8:32 PM Thanks Kim

Marvin G. Celestial July 3, 2015 at 4:41 AM Congratz!!!

Marvin G. Celestial July 3, 2015 at 4:41 AM Nice one Dave! D.W. Rodgers July 3, 2015 at 8:28 PM Thanks marvin, for your kind words and hosting a most interesting contest.

Skat A July 1, 2015 at 12:31 AM thi is deep Dave... SK D.W. Rodgers July 1, 2015 at 8:57 AM Thanks Skat

Richard Lamoureux June 30, 2015 at 8:29 AM This is really well done. D.W. Rodgers July 1, 2015 at 8:11 AM Thank you Richard.