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Dark Matter Fences

though her lips may smile an ineffable sadness lies behind those eyes for despite my best intentions, never would I see them shine for me tis not a fairy tale, our paths must never cross dark matter fences

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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/16/2015 2:09:00 PM

Excellent Senryu

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 11/18/2015 9:59:00 PM

Thanks Nayda

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/20/2015 5:22:00 AM

Congratulations, Dave! sorry for being late. I'm still catching up. Kim :-)

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/20/2015 7:12:00 AM

Thanks Kim, with summer I quite understand catching up.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/4/2015 12:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/7/2015 1:33:00 PM

Thanks Eve

Aiyah Torres

Date: 7/4/2015 10:49:00 AM

so enjoyable treat! congrats for your win! :)

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/7/2015 1:32:00 PM

Thanks Alyah

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/4/2015 8:28:00 AM

I enjoyed reading again. Congrats.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/7/2015 1:32:00 PM

Thanks again Richard

Edward Ebbs

Date: 7/4/2015 1:23:00 AM

Congrats Dave!

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/7/2015 1:32:00 PM

Thanks Ed

Constance La France

Date: 7/3/2015 10:55:00 PM

Dave congratulations on your wonderful win

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/4/2015 4:53:00 PM

Thanks BW

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/3/2015 10:11:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome winning senryu Dave!

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/4/2015 4:39:00 PM

Thanks Dr.Sharma

Skat A

Date: 7/3/2015 6:46:00 PM

Dave, Congratulations on the win. SKAT

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/3/2015 8:33:00 PM

Thanks again SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2015 6:23:00 PM

Dave, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/3/2015 8:33:00 PM

Thanks Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2015 4:44:00 PM

Nicely done, nicely won. congrats to you.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/3/2015 8:33:00 PM

Thanks Andrea

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/3/2015 4:25:00 PM

Congrats on your fantastic win, Dave! Love, Kim

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/3/2015 8:32:00 PM

Thanks Kim

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 7/3/2015 4:41:00 AM

Nice one Dave!

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/3/2015 8:28:00 PM

Thanks marvin, for your kind words and hosting a most interesting contest.

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 7/3/2015 4:41:00 AM

Congratz!!!

Skat A

Date: 7/1/2015 12:31:00 AM

thi is deep Dave... SK

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/1/2015 8:57:00 AM

Thanks Skat

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/30/2015 8:29:00 AM

This is really well done.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/1/2015 8:11:00 AM

Thank you Richard.