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Dark Fallen Loss of Life's Breath

Walking down a narrow path Where do I turn in life Which direction do I go All I feel is a screech in my own echo The pain in a shattering fall of broken glass Disappearing through darkness Where I feel I have taken my last breath sarah m williams

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Date: 8/9/2013 9:47:00 AM
Fix that "Fdel" on the last line. Otherwise, this was very dark & intense. Quite the traumatic setting. Excellent job!
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Book: Shattered Sighs