Tahera Mannan Poet Senryu

Dark Eyes

cold foggy day
misty bridge
presence felt

dark hot eyes
aglow with pain
reaching out

my eyes devour
the stillness
fingers touch

By- Tahera Mannan
For Michael’s contest, ‘Eyes First Meet’

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Carol Sunshine Brown April 4, 2011 at 5:46 AM Congratulations on your win Tahera in the contest "Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts April 3, 2011 at 7:27 PM lovely entry Tahera, congrats on your win

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2011 at 2:05 PM Oh, here is another one I just loved the first time I saw it.congratulations on your win, Tahera,this one was awesome.

Wilma Neels April 2, 2011 at 12:12 PM Congratulations Tahera, on your win in in Michael's contest.. Hope your weekend is a good one ;)

Kash Poet April 2, 2011 at 6:28 AM Congrats Tahera on another super win with this beautiful write--kashinath

Harry Horsman April 2, 2011 at 2:21 AM love these first time round, even better second time, very profound are these, your words say so much Tahera. Harry

Elaine George April 2, 2011 at 1:53 AM Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Tahera. Wonderful string Senryu. Lainie

Gautami Phookan April 2, 2011 at 1:32 AM Fabulous write in very few words.Congratulations on your win.Gautami

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 2, 2011 at 12:03 AM few words but with such an impact, really enjoyed this one, Tahera :) Super congrats on your win :) hugs

Joyce Johnson April 1, 2011 at 6:05 PM Very nice. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick April 1, 2011 at 4:17 PM Congratulations on your win...Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta April 1, 2011 at 3:16 PM Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Michael, Tahera

Nette Onclaud April 1, 2011 at 3:01 PM devouring, tahera.. congrats on winning big here! :) hugggs, nette

Audrey Haick April 1, 2011 at 2:57 PM Amazing win Tahera! Congratulations on your 5th Place Win in Michael's Contest. Always, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire April 1, 2011 at 2:38 PM It's great to see your poem in the winners' circle, Tahera. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico April 1, 2011 at 2:24 PM COngrats my dear on your win in my contest...luv Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 1, 2011 at 2:23 PM Congrats Tahera on your wonderful win in Michael's cool contest my friend.. for this exciting entry ... enjoy another chart topping win so well deserved my friend..

Harry Horsman March 28, 2011 at 7:57 AM I like these, Tahera, good luck in contest. Harry

James Fraser March 27, 2011 at 8:22 AM Wonderful Senryu series Tahera, a joy to read this Sunday afternoon. Good luck in Michael's contest....:)

Carolyn Devonshire March 26, 2011 at 11:45 AM I really like the way his dark eyes reached out and devoured you. Love at first sight for sure, Tahera. Best wishes in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn

Stephen Parker March 26, 2011 at 10:12 AM The cold, still, darkness is artfully eclipsed by the searing eyes! A well-conceived verse.

Andrea Dietrich March 26, 2011 at 7:23 AM oh, it's bluesy, but so wonderful too. eyes devour the stillness. This is an awesome line. I hope this does well. So descriptive, sweetie!