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I was down deep in a dark dreamy dream, wandering a wispy, winding wilderness, where sounds stabbed at an eerie secret silence; with roars, rumbles and the rage of riotous birds, in trees unseen and in branches of twisted tapestry. When I heard with heartbreak mother's heavenly voice, calling in the caliginous, obscure gloomy forest canopy; it was my name and I searched with a narcotic need, I ran wild, rampant and rapacious wailing WAIT. Until, I was worn-out weary and woebegone; I murmured and mumbled- mother, mother . . . Then, sun blazed like a bath into my bedroom. ____________________________ March 23, 2018 Poetry/Alliteration/Dark Dreamy Dream Copyright Protected, ID 03-1006-184-23 All Rights Reserved, 2018, Constance La France Written for the contest, Alliteration Poem, sponsor, Silent One, Judged 03/2018 Second Place Submitted to the Standard contest, A Strand (1052) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/16/2022 First Place

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Date: 1/17/2022 2:14:00 PM
Wonderful descriptive language and loved the alliteration! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest, Constance! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 1/17/2022 3:37:00 PM
Kim, thanks for the compliment and congrats ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Date: 1/16/2022 10:16:00 AM
I have read your winner and was delighted it was on the winners' list. Congrats. Sara...It is sad but yet uplifting to dream of our loved ones like they are right there.
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Date: 1/16/2022 4:24:00 PM
Sara, thanks for the compliment and congrats. I have this dream often of my mother calling me from beyond this realm, sad is my forte ~ friendship and poetry _ Constance
Date: 1/16/2022 6:41:00 AM
"sounds stabbed at an eerie secret silence" - Beautiful! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/16/2022 4:25:00 PM
Christuraj, thanks for the compliment and congratulations ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Date: 4/3/2018 9:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win dear friend, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/3/2018 4:03:00 PM
Beautiful. Congrats on your most deserved win, BW.
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Date: 4/3/2018 7:58:00 AM
What a dream! Many congrats, dear Constance on your win. Elaine
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Date: 4/2/2018 7:05:00 PM
Wonderful use of alliteration in your dark, dreamy poem, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes..
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Date: 4/1/2018 3:17:00 PM
- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 3:04:00 PM
A dark dream indeed, nice use of alliteration BW.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Date: 3/24/2018 4:14:00 PM
- Lovely, B.W. - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/24/2018 5:00:00 PM
Sun thank you for the lovely and hugs
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