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Dark Dreamy Dream

I was down deep in a dark dreamy dream, wandering a wispy, winding wilderness, where sounds stabbed at an eerie secret silence; with roars, rumbles and the rage of riotous birds, in trees unseen and in branches of twisted tapestry. When I heard with heartbreak mother's heavenly voice, calling in the caliginous, obscure gloomy forest canopy; it was my name and I searched with a narcotic need, I ran wild, rampant and rapacious wailing WAIT. Until, I was worn-out weary and woebegone; I murmured and mumbled- mother, mother . . . Then, sun blazed like a bath into my bedroom. ____________________________ March 23, 2018 Poetry/Alliteration/Dark Dreamy Dream Copyright Protected, ID 03-1006-184-23 All Rights Reserved, 2018, Constance La France Written for the contest, Alliteration Poem, sponsor, Silent One, Judged 03/2018 Second Place Submitted to the Standard contest, A Strand (1052) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/16/2022 First Place
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Merryman Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 2:14 PM
Wonderful descriptive language and loved the alliteration! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest, Constance! Blessings, Kim M
La France Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 3:37 PM
Kim, thanks for the compliment and congrats ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Kendrick Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 10:16 AM
I have read your winner and was delighted it was on the winners' list. Congrats. Sara...It is sad but yet uplifting to dream of our loved ones like they are right there.
La France Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 4:24 PM
Sara, thanks for the compliment and congrats. I have this dream often of my mother calling me from beyond this realm, sad is my forte ~ friendship and poetry _ Constance
Alex Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 6:41 AM
"sounds stabbed at an eerie secret silence" - Beautiful! Congratulations!
La France Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 4:25 PM
Christuraj, thanks for the compliment and congratulations ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Roper Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 9:39 PM
Congratulations on your win dear friend, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:03 PM
Beautiful. Congrats on your most deserved win, BW.
George   Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 7:58 AM
What a dream! Many congrats, dear Constance on your win. Elaine
Ashley Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 7:05 PM
Wonderful use of alliteration in your dark, dreamy poem, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes..
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 3:17 PM
- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 3:04 PM
A dark dream indeed, nice use of alliteration BW.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 4:14 PM
- Lovely, B.W. - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 5:00 PM
Sun thank you for the lovely and hugs
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