Dark Dark Red Roses

I remember when 
love spoken plainly 
conveyed all manner
of hidden agendas
hands instead of 
tap dancing keys
unlocked 
a body of work
stroked skin melting into
sultry deep pink summer satin
caressed with a racing 
velvet lipped kiss
smelling the other 
hint of warm leather 
dived deep 
swimming freestyle along 
the undulating waves
towards the pulse
at the base of a throat
then, down towards 
the place where the 
heart beats fluttering 
signs read 
a welcome 
bend in the road,
before heading south
reverse the journey north,
just at that place 
where a whisper 
can be heard
under the ear,
the hint of freshly 
cut silver grass and 
dark dark red roses
the tongue becomes thirsty
for life catching
rivulets like rain 
running along curves
dipping into the
unexplored 
hollows,
but surely 
like a fine wine
that has once 
come-of-age,
ready to be 
poured into it all,
the law of love 
offers no 
fast and hard rules, 
the field 
is wide open
the grass 
so much greener

there grow 
the exotic blue orchids 
bending into and over
all those bleeding
dark dark red roses






Candide Diderot. ‘24

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 1/3/2024 2:50:00 AM
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Candide Diderot
Date: 1/3/2024 2:30:00 PM
The scent of dark dark roses...sent me right off. Thank you.
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