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Dark Clouds-One Liner Two

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Dm Babbit

Date: 12/20/2017 10:00:00 AM

Nicely done, eeirie picture, signs of the times?

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/30/2016 9:51:00 PM

Thankfully those dark clouds don't hang around too long and pass us by quickly... This is an interesting poem, Leonora. I liked it a lot! Well done :)

Len Gasun
Date: 2/6/2016 4:05:00 AM

Belated thank you so much my dear friend. Hugs!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/13/2015 12:25:00 AM

Excellent. Short and effective write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Len Gasun
Date: 12/15/2015 8:58:00 AM

Thank you so much my very dear friend, Ravi. Hugs to you from me. I'll be back later or tomorrow to visit you and the others here.

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/8/2015 9:18:00 PM

Clever write, Leonora! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Len Gasun
Date: 12/11/2015 8:13:00 AM

Thank you so much for stopping by and your congratulatory comments my very dear friend, Kim. Hugs back at you!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2015 6:24:00 PM

An amazing line, Sister, The imagery above is wicked, but I love it. Congratulations on this wonderful win. Always your BFF... LINDA

Len Gasun
Date: 12/11/2015 8:11:00 AM

Hello, my dearest sis Linda. It's my pleasure to see you. I hope you're doing well. Thank you, thank you sooo much for your congratulatory comment and esp for your loving visit. I appreciate it so much. This line just popped up my head, thinking of my recent problems esp. about my brother. He's still in the hospital right now. :(((. Hope he will recover soon. Again thank you soo much. I Miss you dearest sis-BFF! Hugs and kisses from me!

Paul Callus

Date: 12/7/2015 11:20:00 AM

Hi Leonora:) I like this one-liner...short and effective. Congratulations on a lovely win! Regards & hugs // paul

Len Gasun
Date: 12/11/2015 7:50:00 AM

This is about the sadness that comes in life sometimes my dear friend, Paul. Happiness comes next; but I realized white and dark clouds are both transients, anyway. Tytysssm again. I'll visit you soon and the others here, ok! Hugs back at you.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/7/2015 6:55:00 AM

Congratulations Leonora on the placement of the contest.

Len Gasun
Date: 12/11/2015 7:46:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Nayda. I appreciate sooo much for warm congratulatory comments and visit. Thank you so much again for appreciating my poem in your contest. You surprised me. Hugs back to you. I'll visit you soon and other's here.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/7/2015 3:04:00 AM

WOW Leony such line is so powerful!! I love the fierceness of it!~Olive ELoisa =`)hugs!

Len Gasun
Date: 12/11/2015 7:44:00 AM

Hello my dear Amiga! This just popped up my head when I saw the picture of dark clouds /cyclone-thinking of the storm or present problems of mine and my whole family hoping to be fine so soon:(((. My brother was so sick and was confined at the ICU the other night. He's enlargement of the heart and I'm praying that his lungs and liver will not be affected :(( Thank you soooo much for your stopping by. Hugs back at you!

Len Gasun
Date: 12/11/2015 7:32:00 AM

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/7/2015 12:43:00 AM

Congrats on great win with this amazingly beautiful write Leonora! So glad to have ur visits to my page.. I hv missed you!

Len Gasun
Date: 12/11/2015 7:32:00 AM

Thank you so much my very dear friend, Dr. Upma. You're much welcome,and I thank you more for not forgetting me my dear friend and for your continues encouragement. I've missed you, too. I'll be back soon to read more from you if you don't mind, perhaps after my class tom/this weekend ok? Hugs and cheers!

James Inman

Date: 12/6/2015 7:14:00 PM

Very nice Leonora.

Len Gasun
Date: 12/6/2015 7:15:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend. I was not expecting that this entry will win. Congratulations too! Hugs and Cheers!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2015 6:52:00 PM

this is just wonderful. I really like it, and congratulations on the win.

Len Gasun
Date: 12/6/2015 7:28:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend Andrea! Many congrats as well to you! Hugs and Cheers!

Lin Lane

Date: 12/6/2015 3:12:00 PM

well done, Leonora.. congratulations.

Len Gasun
Date: 12/6/2015 8:05:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend. Many congratulations as well! Hugs and cheers!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/6/2015 2:28:00 PM

Lovely one liner Leonora congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Len Gasun
Date: 12/6/2015 8:32:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend. Many warm congrats to you as well! Hugs and cheers!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/6/2015 2:23:00 PM

- Congrats on your great "One Liners Two" image, dear Leonora !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun
Date: 12/6/2015 8:41:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend Anne Lise! Many Warm Congrats as well to you! I was laughing at myself last night because when I looked back at the picture that inspired me, I realized that it was a tornado :))) so, no other option but to change the picture to a picture of clouds :)). I'm so glad and honored that I made it with you. Thank you so much! Hugs and cheers!

Skat A

Date: 12/6/2015 2:22:00 PM

Hello Lovely Leonora,, Congrats on your one liner TWO win. SKAT

Len Gasun
Date: 12/6/2015 8:27:00 PM

Hi, my dearest sis and friend, Skat! Thank you, thank you so much! I appreciate gratefully your stopping by! May I also take this chance to warmly congratulate you on your past wins and featured poems. Hugs and cheers! Wishing you the best always!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/6/2015 7:07:00 AM

- Great one liner, dear friend Leonora !!! - Good luck in contest - Happy Sunday !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun
Date: 12/6/2015 8:46:00 AM

Happy Sunday to you as well my dear friend, Anne Lise! Thank you so much for your visit and your encouraging comments. But I realized that the picture above is not a cloud, it's a cyclone or tornado I think, so I've to make attach another image. I've overlooked the picture. Tytyssm again! Hugs back to you!

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 12/5/2015 11:01:00 PM

Hello, Soul sister. Sorry, I missed our birthday October 5th. I hope you did not forget about me. I sang you happy birthday while others sang for me October 5th. I've been on All Poetry under the name San-D, I don't use the same pen name I have here. A beautiful picture from your sky to my sky. Forever your soul sister. A favorite one Liner Poem. San-D

Len Gasun
Date: 12/6/2015 9:03:00 AM

Btw, thank you, thank you so much for everything, for your songs and greetings. I was singing for you, too. Hope you've read my message last Oct. though a lil bit late. But your birthday is forever both in my mind and heart. Tytysssm im so really happy to see you and for liking my one liner poem though not that good for me yet especially, I overlooked the picture given in the contest. Thank you soo much my loving friend and Libramate. More hugs and smiles from me to you!

Len Gasun
Date: 12/6/2015 8:56:00 AM

Oh, Hello my dearest Friend, Soul Sis and Libramate, Sandy Ivy! So nice to see you back! I'm sooo happy!! Many hugs to you. Thank you so much for coming by. I can never forget you of course my dear friend for we''ve the same birthday . So hope, you'd a wonderful one! I miss U. So how's allpoetry? It's a bigger family i think. I'm sure you also enjoyed there. Can I visit you one time?