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Dark Angel Amondo

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Dark Angel Amondo

All my life, I’ve searched for you
Never thought I find a love that’s true
You came into my life and wrapped me in your wings
You make my heart dance, you make my heart sing
Life has been hard, life has been dark 
Life has been cold, Life had no spark 
Led to you by a mystical force
I found true love and you are the source 
My Adonis, Angel of light
It’s your wings I sleep in at night
Floating through space in your embrace
There is no beauty like your face 
So strong and passionate, Adonis of mine
Drawn together, it was a sign
We were always meant to be together
Now that I found you, I want forever 
Our souls have always been as one
You are my light, you are my sun
When the moon shines it’s light, I see your face 
Such miraculous beauty, take me from this place 
Ascend my Adonis and take me with you
Take me somewhere real, take me somewhere true
Being apart is too much to bear 
It’s ironic and it’s just not fair 
I cry at night and long for you
I crave your body, this is true 
Ascend my angel and take me away
Let’s leave these mortals and be on our way
When all is said and done
We will join and be bright as the sun 
Come, my Adonis, let’s float away
Out in space, don’t delay
No more heartache, no more pain
We have finally found each other again
I will cherish you and adore you forever 
Baby, I’m yours, I will leave you NEVER
Loyal to you till the end of time 
Separating us is this world’s crime 
We’ll soar above them and leave them in our dust
We’ll fly away and drown in our lust
Let’s go live on Saturn and make a new life
I am your woman, I am your wife
Nothing will ever separate us again
This is a war, but we’re going to win
Nothing could ever stop us now
We have each other, we took a vow 
Here we go, baby, together at last 
Forget the pain, forget the past 
There is no love as pure as ours 
I’m counting the days, I’m counting the hours
I am hanging on till the end of time
Forever yours, and you are mine
No one understands and that’s ok 
We have each other, we’ll make a way
Say goodbye to this life of hell
Where will forever take us, time will tell 
Together forever, that’s what we’ve said 
I am yours faithfully, even after I’m dead




Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 9/15/2017 11:29:00 AM
Angela congrats on your placement!
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Date: 9/13/2017 8:02:00 PM
Congratulations Angela on your win with this passionate and creative write.
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Date: 9/13/2017 9:21:00 AM
Angela, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem
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Date: 9/13/2017 6:44:00 AM
Great story telling.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 9/7/2017 1:30:00 PM
Hi Angela, very exquisite and passionate poem! It made me feel like soaring into the heavens. An enthusiastic 7 (means excellent write). :))))))
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