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Dark and Twisted, Another Bloody Body Awaits

Dark And Twisted, Another Bloody Body Awaits There she lies, bloody dead at foot of my bed How the hell had our love morphed into this Throat slashed, body decaying without a head Smell of rotting flesh and grossly stale piss. Cold reality now just a dark and ragged blur Every day ghastly, morbid scene eats my mind Absolutely no memory of savagery heaped on her House sealed up tight so nobody can ever find. Red in rage, memory from bloody ages long ago Now burdened with a lovely but rotting mess Facing each day, a scene from a horror show Fearing discovery of my greatest, dark distress. A dream that night, slashing a monster's throat Walking around in sweet red blood and gore Satan pleased with this finely sacrificed goat Now dark and twisted, soul demands even more. Lurking in a long dark alley in this small town Obeying murderous, mad urges torturing me Waiting to seize and bring another girl down This darkness not resting, my soul's evil sea! There she lies, bloody dead at foot of my bed How the hell had our love morphed into this Throat slashed, body decaying without a head Smell of rotting flesh and grossly stale piss. **** For contest, Dark and Twisted Contest Deadline 10/16/2015 12:00:00 AM Note Form Sponsor No updates yet... Contest Description What to Submit? 1 original, poem on the theme of Dark & Twisted

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Date: 10/15/2015 9:38:00 PM
Hi Robert, Nice to see you on Nate's winning list. Congrats... Love SKAT
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Date: 10/14/2015 8:04:00 AM
Ahhh, the wonders of the psychotic mind, horrendous yet fascinating. Nice Write Robert.
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Date: 10/14/2015 12:07:00 AM
Robert, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/13/2015 11:43:00 PM
Wonderful take on the theme Robert with this superb winning write! Big congrats!
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Date: 10/13/2015 9:43:00 PM
Robert' thank you. nate
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Date: 10/12/2015 9:47:00 PM
Lurking in a long dark alley in this small town Obeying murderous, mad urges torturing me Waiting to seize and bring another girl down You must have been the guy lurking in my poem Demon Eyes. Enjoyed your poem
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Date: 9/19/2015 8:36:00 PM
Robert, you tackeled the theme and so much more with this write. It's creepy , dark and twisted. Great imagery. The first line had me spooked but l kept reading until the end. Good job! Best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis 7
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Date: 9/19/2015 4:20:00 PM
OH MY YES< this is dark and twisted all right AND bloody!! Great job on the challenge, Robert. Also it's a good one for Halloween coming up!
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Date: 9/19/2015 10:25:00 AM
Bloody way to go, Robert :-). I don't normally go for this kind, but I was curious how you'd tackle the theme. You did it bloody :-) well, IMHO. I thought I could dabble, but found I do not have what it takes...yet. Who knows next time? Good luck!
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Date: 9/19/2015 10:11:00 AM
OMGodd!!!!!! You have really painted a bloody picture here.Its dark,nasty,and disturbing.The first verse almost threw me off and I knew I was in for a bloody ride down hell.The descriptions were so bloody that I almost pulled out my cigarette from the lips while reading.Great work here.And I wish you the best in the contest.
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