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Dark Ages At the Deep End ( For Alex )

Dark Ages at The Deep End  ( For Alex )



What does our society teach our children
Churn them out as fodder
For the cultural use of consumerism

The empty promises of success
And the great grand promise of never ending wealth
Plies them with ever needful obsessions

Scientific, mathematical, technology
Tested, retested, awarded, rewarded
Good little robot sent out into the world

To fill their lives with even more sparkly, spanking brand new possessions
To account their lives by material attainment
And to judge others by their lack of

Out to feed the numbers of marketable goods
To be counted by adverts
And to face life uneducated and alone

Thrown in at the deep end
These ever hungering and even younger adults
Looking for the promised land of electronic gadgets

Have they been taught to cope with failure 
How to respond to one another
How to communicate

Do they know the art of parenting
How to define fact from illusion
And a reality from a dream

Have they been shown the art of problem solving
Do they know how to deal with overwhelming emotions
How do they know who to turn to

What does our society teach our children

The third largest killer of young adults today, is suicide

Living in the dark ages still, of human relations
Churned out for the fodder
For this cultural capitalist use of consumerism

We have learnt nothing, nothing about them
Though our modern historical claims to be so concerned
Still they leave our schools knowing nothing about themselves

The unattainable prize
Has a price of failure
But what else is there

Some join the joke of a gangster subculture
Some join the rat race ( what else is there )
Some rebel in drug faced reflections of societies crap

Some turn to religion to hide the demon inside them
Some just swallow the lies of quick easy gettable
And some find freedom at the end of a rope

What does society teach our children

Mere acceptance of an illusion
Good little robot sent out into the world
Thrown in at the deep end; now learn to swim

The third largest killer of young adults today; is suicide

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/10/2009 1:47:00 PM
Sadly, I've been on both sides of this - and were it not for a small voice inside of myself telling me to leave my home at 22, I'd have followed in my mother's sad footsteps. I was gone 3 days later. All we can do is tell our kids, and hope they listen. love, Kristin
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Date: 3/10/2009 1:42:00 PM
Extremely depressing and way too much truth in your write. Something I've been thinking a lot about lately myself. How did we ever get so screwed up? We are not teaching them what really matters. They are unprepared and these days, if they don't end up in the lines of your poem, there is a pill for everything and surely they will be prescribed one. Too disturbing. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/10/2009 1:29:00 PM
This is powerful writing my friend. This goes with my poem this morning.. very strong words in this piece.. very unfortunate but sometimes the pain is so dark that is the only answer they can hear at the time.
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Date: 3/10/2009 1:11:00 PM
I don't know how parents today sleep, with the troubled world that their children must face. I thought it was hard enough when mine were in school, but nothing like my grandchildren must cope with. Well said, Colin. ~ Carrie
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