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"Mild brown eyes beckon me to the past, but memory provides no clue." - Mason Cooley Dark are the eyes of my love - dark like freshly brewed coffee brimming with the lust for life Dark is the skin of my love - dark like a beautiful ebony night and velvet to my touch Dark is the hair of my love - dark like soft, rich sable through which I tenderly run my fingers Dark is the mahogony obsidian chakra of my love which empowers him with strength and sensuality, and mesmerizes me with the poetry of his soul

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Nancy Kaufman

Date: 9/12/2023 3:14:00 PM

Andrea. He sounds absolutely gorgeous (if this is your "he", and your words sculpted him so beautifully. Loved it!

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/11/2023 3:26:00 PM

Exceptional poetry my friend. So very romantic and imaginary in its future delights. A jewel and a new fav for me. God bless you.

Constance La France

Date: 9/10/2023 10:48:00 PM

Andrea, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the quote and image too, Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/10/2023 8:43:00 PM

"dark like freshly brewed coffee" - Beautiful. The entire poem is nice. Congratulations!

Karen Croft

Date: 9/10/2023 7:22:00 PM

Congratulations. Love it!!

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/10/2023 8:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your contest top win with this lovely poem, Andrea.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 9/8/2023 4:20:00 AM

Andrea Andrea Andrea. Good Morning. Please allow me to let your entry stand. There is nothing I could add. The is most beautiful and gorgeous poetry. For all those who do not read I pray. And yes, your entry is one of those to be read out loud with emphasis and feeling. Read back you entry and you will see its worth. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful morning and weekend. Blessings always (smile)

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/7/2023 11:22:00 PM

You have given a very romantic approach to the prompt word "dark" in your own creative way dear Ria. "Dark like freshly brewed coffee", that's lovely. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs... ~ Ani

Miranda Hawley

Date: 9/7/2023 7:41:00 PM

Descriptive!

John Lawless

Date: 9/7/2023 5:07:00 PM

SO, let the competition to see who shall finish second begin. A masterful write and a brilliantly unique take on the theme. I must FAVE this as i know i shall return to peruse its sensuality again.

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/7/2023 3:20:00 PM

so beautifully written, touching poem indeed, thanks Andrea

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/7/2023 12:55:00 PM

So beautiful! Ooh lala!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/7/2023 1:04:00 PM

if you are talking about the guy, Yep!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/7/2023 11:37:00 AM

- He was beautiful and dark, you describe his charm so wonderfully, Andrea ... he is good to rest your eyes on :) - GL in the contest ... hope Constanse likes them tall dark :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 9/7/2023 11:22:00 AM

“Dark is the mahogany obsidian chakra of my love” that line would stay in my mind for a while, so creative and striking! Loved reading this truly. Flows in sheer eloquence . Goodluck for the contesf