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Dark or Decayed Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 09/05/2023

Dark

Dark is the night
          under the moonshadow,
           walking to the suburbs
            with a one way ticket,
               going to nowhere 
                 to be be found.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 11:07 PM
Maria, congratulations on your win in my contest, I like your image, Constance
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 12:54 AM
Thank you very much, Constance. Have a nice dayxxxx
Alex Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 9:20 PM
Short and sweet work. Congratulations!
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 12:55 AM
Thank you very much Christuraj. Blessings!
Poet Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 1:54 PM
This is a great, concise poem that packs a punch. I relished reading it and offer my hearty congratulations on your win in the contest, Maria.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 1:58 PM
Thank you so much, Sotto. Glad you liked it
Baker Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 3:49 PM
"A one-way ticket going to nowhere." Mysterious and intriguing poetry, Maria. Thanks for the opportunity to let it be wherever my mind takes me. I enjoy your entry for the contest and hope it places well, my new friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 12:32 AM
Good morning Bill. I'm happy you liked it. Thanks a lot. Blessings
Lindley Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 4:20 AM
This is a very fine, short poem that is indeed a powerful piece. Once in my youth I took a walk like that. And it was shivering cold, like an icecicle sliding down my naked back. A gem and a fav too. God bless you.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 4:38 AM
Hello Robert. Thank you so much for your nice words and for passing by. Have a nice day...!
Rolland Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 3:24 PM
awesome, i felt the dark all around
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 3:31 PM
Thank you Yann, So nice your comment. Have a nice evening
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