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Dark or Decayed Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 09/05/2023

Dark is the night under the moonshadow, walking to the suburbs with a one way ticket, going to nowhere to be be found.

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Constance La France

Date: 9/10/2023 11:07:00 PM

Maria, congratulations on your win in my contest, I like your image, Constance

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/11/2023 12:54:00 AM

Thank you very much, Constance. Have a nice dayxxxx

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/10/2023 9:20:00 PM

Short and sweet work. Congratulations!

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/11/2023 12:55:00 AM

Thank you very much Christuraj. Blessings!

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/10/2023 1:54:00 PM

This is a great, concise poem that packs a punch. I relished reading it and offer my hearty congratulations on your win in the contest, Maria.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/10/2023 1:58:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sotto. Glad you liked it

Bill Baker

Date: 9/9/2023 3:49:00 PM

"A one-way ticket going to nowhere." Mysterious and intriguing poetry, Maria. Thanks for the opportunity to let it be wherever my mind takes me. I enjoy your entry for the contest and hope it places well, my new friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/10/2023 12:32:00 AM

Good morning Bill. I'm happy you liked it. Thanks a lot. Blessings

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/9/2023 4:20:00 AM

This is a very fine, short poem that is indeed a powerful piece. Once in my youth I took a walk like that. And it was shivering cold, like an icecicle sliding down my naked back. A gem and a fav too. God bless you.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/9/2023 4:38:00 AM

Hello Robert. Thank you so much for your nice words and for passing by. Have a nice day...!

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/5/2023 3:24:00 PM

awesome, i felt the dark all around

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/5/2023 3:31:00 PM

Thank you Yann, So nice your comment. Have a nice evening