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Dare I Write For You

Dare I now close my eyes and visualize
what kind of childhood memories you hide
inside a mind that churns out a surprise;
Each write, the genius cannot be denied.
As I read each and every poem I try
to understand the heart behind each word.
The lines which may have led someone to sigh
have left this ardent reader pleased and stirred.
      Dare I disclose that I have fantasized,
      with simple lines I hoped to tributize?








Kim Patrice Nunez
18 August 2015

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CayCay Godwin

September 2, 2015 at 11:35 AM

I am so glad I found you and I plan to read 'your everything.' You are very talented poet ... CayCay

James Inman

August 28, 2015 at 9:52 AM

Lovely deep poem, Kim. I love the return comment you left for Jack.

Afolabi Muideen

August 24, 2015 at 12:28 AM

A profound write Kim, I hope things is okay now; hope you will pardon my not being around these days. I must say" too much thoughts are suffocating my willing to write these day" please stay firm.. Love..LIGHT...............A.M.

Laura Breidenthal

August 23, 2015 at 7:07 PM

You are a special, humble and beautiful poet Kim! This is just so so good... Those last two lines are awesome...the fact that as a reader you seek to understand fully and deeply is an amazing quality. I always enjoy reading your work and seeing into your heart and mind. Hope all's well! Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich

August 23, 2015 at 6:40 PM

Also, it seems that you are recovering Step by step, it's all we can do when these things happen. Take care!

Andrea Dietrich

August 23, 2015 at 6:39 PM

this so very nice, Kim. I really enjoyed seeing what you had to say to all the dear poets!

Wilma Neels

August 23, 2015 at 10:22 AM

Kim this is an awesome piece ;) wishing you a speedy recovery as well. You are in my thoughts ;) hugs Wilma

Eric Boddie

August 21, 2015 at 9:52 AM

that is so amazing to me....I wish the muse was my identity....because then I would know for sure....that my words have the power to cure....;)

Eric Boddie

August 21, 2015 at 9:56 AM

I didn't notice you were ill....get better soon ok....my pen needs your words to fuel it....;)

Justin Bordner

August 20, 2015 at 9:15 PM

To fantasize upon a heart's scarlet eyes, leads to love and sympathetic sighs Kim...J.A.B.

Ravi Sathasivam

August 20, 2015 at 6:38 AM

Sorry and sad to read. I pray for your quick recovery. Take rest.

Kp Nunez

August 20, 2015 at 9:05 AM

Thank you, Ravi. Not fully back to normal but has started with some light activities, like correspondence and posting and commenting here at Soup, but only for a time though. hugs!

Jack Horne

August 19, 2015 at 2:57 PM

intriuging write here and i hope you are much better soon x

Kp Nunez

August 19, 2015 at 10:45 PM

Yes, I'm intrigued by the writer-reader dance myself, Jack. An interesting scenario isn't it? If a reader does not understand or worse, she misinterprets the piece, should the writer be offended? IS the reader supposed to "work" in trying to understand the piece? On the rare occasion that it resonates, who did a good job, the writer for writing in a style which can be comprehended easily, or the reader, for being in a situation where she now fully understands what was previously unclear to her? Poetry is supposed to be subjective, right?

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 19, 2015 at 2:30 PM

- Sad to read hope it goes better with you, dear Kim - I've been away for a while me too - Nice to see you and read your poems today - All the best to you, my friend - big hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

August 19, 2015 at 10:33 PM

Thank you my friend! Nice to see you're back too. hugs!

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 19, 2015 at 10:16 AM

I was wondering what has happened to you. From what I read it was not that serious. I pray all is well and all will be so in the future! Your writing here so inquisitive and philosophical! Welcome back, dear Kim.

Kp Nunez

August 19, 2015 at 10:32 PM

Thanks, sire. No it's not serious, just a relapse of a simple flu that should have taken 2-3 days only. Again, thanks for your kind words, sire. hugs!

Richard Lamoureux

August 19, 2015 at 9:55 AM

Sorry to hear you have had a temporary setback, the operative word being "Temporary" my you be returned to full strength and have your heart soar amongst the clouds.

Kp Nunez

August 19, 2015 at 10:30 PM

Thanks, Rick. The purpose of the disclosure was to explain my side. Seems some are complaining about comments not being replied to. I've been absent before and I also explained the reason. Thank you for the well wishes, though. hugs!

Nudershada Cabanes

August 19, 2015 at 9:53 AM

Get well soon Kabayan. Thanks for the visit and for the comments on my poems... Nudershada

Kp Nunez

August 19, 2015 at 10:50 PM

Thank you too, kabayan! Hope to visit some more...hugs!

Jill Spagnola

August 19, 2015 at 7:23 AM

Kim, this is an extremely deep succinct write. I know there is more you are transmitting than I can comprehend. Awesome! :), jill I'll take more hugs!!!! I am trying to figure out soupmail

Jill Spagnola

August 19, 2015 at 7:26 AM

If I may be so bold, what ails you Kim?Kim perhaps you feel well enough to enter the partner up contest with me if you haven't already done so. I have never collaborated on a poem, I think we would be wonderful compliments to each other :), jill

Jill Spagnola

August 19, 2015 at 7:25 AM

I'm very glad you are feeling well enough to write!

Paul Callus

August 18, 2015 at 6:00 PM

Hi Kim! Sorry to hear you have not been well, but pleased that you are recovering! And yes...you can dare to write anything you please; this special license belongs to every true poet. Take care & hugs ~ paul

John Fleming

August 18, 2015 at 1:44 PM

Dearest Kim. It is with shock and concern that I read of the state of your present health and your recent illness. May I wish you a speedy and complete recovery. God bless you and comfort you, Kim Patrice Nunez! Your friend always, John.

Anu Nayak

August 18, 2015 at 11:58 AM

Dear Kim, i pray for your quick recovery.........take full rest and take care........love, Anu:-)

Anu Nayak

August 18, 2015 at 12:33 PM

thank you dear Kim:-):-):-)....love, Anu

Jan Allison

August 18, 2015 at 11:32 AM

Get well soon Kim the only soup you need is Chicken soup ! Hugs jan xxx

Jan Allison

August 18, 2015 at 12:52 PM

Oh I'm glad you are on the mend Kim and happy my homonym poem made you smile:-) hugs JAN XXX

Nette Onclaud

August 18, 2015 at 11:07 AM

must be our weather, kim... hope you'll recover fast... a superb piece from someone who is still recuperating.. that's the spirit.. huggs

Eileen Manassian

August 18, 2015 at 8:58 AM

I'm so sorry you are ill, Kim. I hope that you feel better soon.....I posted a comment on your collab with John and he mentioned that you weren't well. I'm glad that you can write again....and such a lovely piece. :) Get better soon, dear. Hugs