Richard Lamoureux Poet Pantoum

Dappled In Light and Fairy Dust

I walk through a forest dappled in light
Hearing a strange humming just beyond some ferns
Pushing the folliage aside my curiosity entices me
My mind unable to comprehend what I see

hearing a strange humming just beyond some ferns
Tiny little fairy buzzing above the ground
My mind unable to comprehend what I see
She sees me and blows a sparkly dust my way

Tiny little fairy floating above the ground
My eyes are transfixed by her delicate beauty
She sees me and blows a sparkly dust my way
It appears we have become the same size

My eyes are transfixed by her delicate beauty
Pushing the foliage aside my curiosity entices me
It appears we have become the same size
We fly through a Forest dappled in light

Fairy Dust Contest

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Connie Gildersleeve July 9, 2013 at 9:29 AM Richard this is a fantastic fantasy. I enjoyed your imagination my friend. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Joyce Johnson July 8, 2013 at 8:20 PM What a fun fantasy. congratulations Richard. Love, Joyce Richard Lamoureux July 9, 2013 at 8:18 AM Thanks so much Joyce

Eileen Manassian July 8, 2013 at 7:12 AM Congrats, Richard. I always look for your name in the winner's list. You're a winner in my book! :) Richard Lamoureux July 8, 2013 at 7:22 AM Thanks Eileen, hope you have a great day.

Shadow Hamilton July 8, 2013 at 5:33 AM hi Richard a magical flight of fantasy most enjoyable poem congrats on your win Ty for entering Shadow x smiles Richard Lamoureux July 8, 2013 at 7:24 AM Thanks Shadow for picking my poem.

Monterey Sirak June 27, 2013 at 7:30 PM Beautiful, imaginative poem. The lines flow and dance along like tiny fairy footsteps. Thank you so much for your comments on A Secret Never Told. They are very encouraging and comforting Richard Lamoureux June 27, 2013 at 7:33 PM Your most welcome, I really felt your pain within your words. I wanted to reach out and comfort that small child. What a horrible burden to have carried all these years.

Poet Destroyer A June 26, 2013 at 6:05 PM love the fantasy, and light you have dappled here... thank you always~ LINDA Richard Lamoureux June 26, 2013 at 8:20 PM Thanks Linda

Poet. Undertaker June 26, 2013 at 8:06 AM Hi Richard, great write. its great to read your fantasy write. it gives great joy. Richard Lamoureux June 26, 2013 at 8:18 AM Thanks Jenish

Eileen Manassian June 26, 2013 at 7:45 AM This is lovely, Richard...good luck Eileen Manassian June 26, 2013 at 11:19 PM Just stopping by to thank you for the encouragement you have given me recently. It is much appreciated. Have a good evening and night.... Richard Lamoureux June 26, 2013 at 8:01 AM Thanks Eileen

Sara Kendrick June 26, 2013 at 7:27 AM Reads like a winner to me..Very captiviting work..Good luck in the contest..Sara Richard Lamoureux June 26, 2013 at 7:28 AM Thanks Rick Richard Lamoureux June 26, 2013 at 7:28 AM Thanks Sara