Barbara Gorelick Poet Alliteration

Danny's Dinosaurs

Danny diligently drew delightful dinosaurs
Delightful dinosaurs Danny diligently drew
If Danny diligently drew delightful dinosaurs-
Where are the dinosaurs Danny diligently drew?
Whew!


For the dinosaur contest..(obviously)

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Jack Horne April 10, 2011 at 11:34 AM LOL - very clever piece : ) Jack

Daver Austin April 10, 2011 at 5:28 AM Love the diligence of this piece. Clever. Love it. Love, Dave

James Peranteau April 9, 2011 at 8:52 PM ;) ;) and another ;)...great witty write dear poet ! Much love, james

Carolyn Devonshire April 9, 2011 at 6:06 PM Funny one, BG. Great take on the cartoon for the contest. I don't know how you managed all that alliteration, but it gave me a laugh. Best wishes for success! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick April 9, 2011 at 1:28 PM Good luck in the contest with this great Alliteration..Reads like winning material to me..I like the book "Danny and The Dinosaur"..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta April 9, 2011 at 12:51 PM Nice interplay of words seeking something that does not exist. Enjoyed the humor in the write, Barbara. Good luck in the contest.

James Foulk April 9, 2011 at 11:46 AM wow what a mouth full, it got me out of breathe just reading it. try saying it real fast. it was a great piece of work, enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest.