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Danny's Dinosaurs

Danny diligently drew delightful dinosaurs
Delightful dinosaurs Danny diligently drew
If Danny diligently drew delightful dinosaurs-
Where are the dinosaurs Danny diligently drew?
Whew!


For the dinosaur contest..(obviously)

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick | Year Posted 2011

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Jack Horne Date: 4/10/2011 11:34:00 AM LOL - very clever piece : ) Jack Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 4/10/2011 5:28:00 AM Love the diligence of this piece. Clever. Love it. Love, Dave Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 4/9/2011 8:52:00 PM ;) ;) and another ;)...great witty write dear poet ! Much love, james Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/9/2011 6:06:00 PM Funny one, BG. Great take on the cartoon for the contest. I don't know how you managed all that alliteration, but it gave me a laugh. Best wishes for success! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/9/2011 1:28:00 PM Good luck in the contest with this great Alliteration..Reads like winning material to me..I like the book "Danny and The Dinosaur"..Sara Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/9/2011 12:51:00 PM Nice interplay of words seeking something that does not exist. Enjoyed the humor in the write, Barbara. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 4/9/2011 11:46:00 AM wow what a mouth full, it got me out of breathe just reading it. try saying it real fast. it was a great piece of work, enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest. Login to Reply