Dangers of Pensioner Dating

A seventy year old couple on a romantic date,
Were at a bistro eating seafood crepe,
Feeling so good, a kiss they sought,
Locking mouths their false teeth got caught,
And both sets fell onto the plate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ellison Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 4:47 PM
Big cackle here John... you possess a great sense of humour! You're my kinda guy! More, more, more...
Williams Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 6:49 PM
Thank you very much Jack......... I will do my best to keep them comin',..................It just depends if me brains are hummin'.......'''''kind regards from down under''''''
Allison Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 3:55 AM
ha ha ha:-) priceless humour - I love it! A 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx
Williams Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 5:36 AM
I always thought walking sticks would be the problem- oh well, time will tell. Thanks again Jan. Kind regards---John
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