Dane Marked

My life became a song of lark
When Iris spoke to me from Denmark
When I first saw her getting embark
My life reached a decisive landmark.

My life got an important bookmark,
When the message came from Denmark.
My life will become the rainbow arc,
When Iris will come into my park.

I long for Iris in my garden to empark,
Feeling her in my touch question mark,
The soil is there, the seed is hot stark,
What needs be is a single spark.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 7:08 AM
Wonderful piece Dr.Ram, many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James
Freeman Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 5:24 PM
A witty presentation Doc, Congratulation on your success in Carolyn's contest. Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 4:06 PM
Congratulations on your win in this challenging contest. Love, Joyce
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May 28, 2010 at 1:22 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery for a creative perspective. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Carolyn's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen
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May 28, 2010 at 9:51 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your HM in the Monorhyme contest with this wonderful write.. enjoy a special honor for a well deserved winning poem.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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May 28, 2010 at 9:13 AM
Lovely images in your monorhyme, Dr. Ram. Couldn't find a definition of "empark" but enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
K. Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 11:04 PM
A very enjoyable monorhyme Dr. Ram :) having that particular ending probably wasn't easy to write but you made it look effortless :)
Sweetheart Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 12:22 PM
thankxxxx Dr. Ram and hope u will also comment on my blog for the military and the holiday as I sent the comments to my young son Eric in Iraq.. appreciate.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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May 27, 2010 at 9:15 AM
Dr. Ram, enjoyed reading this remarkable poem with a spark! And thank you for your kind ongoing comments on my poems...All the best!...Gert
Freeman Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 8:46 AM
Dr Ram is this for the contest Monorhyme? A unique ideal, you have going. Agape, Moses
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May 27, 2010 at 8:39 AM
WELL DONE, DOCTOR. HOPE YOU FIND THAT SINGLE SPARK WAITING FOR YOU.-SKAT
Austin Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 8:26 AM
"Who is Sylvia?" A famous song by Schubert. "Who is Iris?" She has you hypnotized. Love it, Doctor. Love, daver
Richards Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 8:14 AM
What a delightful poem....I love this clever wording...Nicely done. Iris....this was my mother's favorite flower!! :) ~ Carrie
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 10:28 PM
OH, a DAne from Denmark. I get it! They are called Danes there, right? That's a cute one. The name Iris is cute too. LUv, andrea
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