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The year 2000 about to done with, and only the Atlantic Ocean divides us. Now around me the snow falls. If I could see you in months, I shall turn the months in snowballs. All January will sever me, A step more- February will brush, March will bring you closer, Spring will remind me of you, May-wreaths will bind me, and...Denmark not far away in June. Oh, How would it be? After such a long wait, How would I greet thee? But Alas!My boat was on a smooth sail in June Undaunted to find the land to sow the seeds, but missed a little rain. Unlike Columbus, dolefully sailed back. What was to turn to reality became a distant dream. That dream stays with me altering the colour of emotions. The love remains well, The rest is unsavory. Indeed misery outlives the joy Denmark remains a distant dream.
+++++++ November 30, 2014 Form : Lyric Contest: Waking Dreams by Gautami Phookan ============================ October 31, 2014 Form: Lyric Dr. Ram Mehta First Place Win Contest:C'est la vie by Judy Konos ===================== April 5, 2014 Form Lyric Sixth Place Win Contest: Many Miles Away by Roger Horsch

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Date: 11/17/2014 5:00:00 PM
No one ever stops wondering about the choices they make in life, and if we still can dream it, then it can be made a reality... Congrats on your win with this great poem! I really enjoyed it, Dr. Ram!
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Date: 11/13/2014 3:39:00 PM
Congrats on the win Dr Ram
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Date: 11/13/2014 2:18:00 PM
Hi Dr. Mehta, Nice imagery and structure. It was an enjoyable read. Congratulations on the win. Earl
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Date: 11/13/2014 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta.
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Date: 11/13/2014 7:02:00 AM
Congrats Dr. Mehta. Excellent piece. Ralph
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Date: 11/12/2014 8:41:00 PM
A wonderful win, Dr. Ram ! Congratulations on your number one poem!
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Date: 11/12/2014 5:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta.
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Date: 11/12/2014 3:33:00 PM
many congrats on your win Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan x
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Date: 11/12/2014 3:11:00 PM
Don't worry Dr.,seeing Denmark will still be just a matter of time. Congrats on the win
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Date: 11/12/2014 2:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dr. Ram. Your poem was very touching. Sandra
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Date: 11/12/2014 1:43:00 PM
Very nice, Dr. Ram, such a unique approach describing your uncompleted journey. One of your best for me...2000? This piece would be a fort-year old and I love it.
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Date: 4/7/2014 6:38:00 PM
congratulations Dr Ram on a well deserved win
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Date: 4/7/2014 6:04:00 PM
DR., Congratulations, a wonderful win. Thank you for sharing how far your distance goes. ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/7/2014 10:19:00 AM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram, This is a very good poem........Roger
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 4/9/2014 10:34:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 10/2/2011 3:22:00 AM
Good to see your featured poem D Ram, also found it a refreshing read..
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Date: 9/27/2011 3:00:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week Dr.Ram. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/26/2011 8:46:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your lyric "Dane Marks" being featured. Vince
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Date: 9/26/2011 12:07:00 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on featured poem this week on PS.. great write to share luv..
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