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Dandy Dandelions

DANDY        DANDELIONS 

Joy springs sudden and without talk
From the simplest of childish roots.
Homebound from work to metro along city walk
I saw  today on one of my regular routes,

The overgrowth of dandelions from the sun,
Very tall and reaching through the iron  fence, black and low   
Wind catching them  waving  happily  in fun,
Like little girls  all standing tall on tip-toe  

Trying to catch my attention and saying “Look at me,
Isn’t my bright yellow dress the prettiest?”
And indeed each one was  beautiful  to see  -
It was too hard to choose the loveliest . 

I felt like  god  with  these tiny saffron  Seraphim  
Looking  for   my  admiration and recognition:
For tireless, glowing, heated energetic  vim,
Jostling and  basking in my approval  of their motion. 

Sometimes a dandelion  is simply  a dandy  to a child:
And today I suddenly   felt  the meaning of  this grow.  
They were in truth all dandies,  and  I smiled  -
I smiled silently all the way home in the metro.

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NOTE

This is not intended as a parody of his poem,   but  many times I’ve read of  Wordsworth’s  elation and his  feelings about his  daffodils.  Today I discovered for myself what he  felt, and it was thought-provoking.

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Written 6  April  2012 and entered in 	
Lisa Hiatt ~Dark Poetess's  Contest  Where have all the flowers gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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