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Those innocent days! Fistful of eons ago, The good times did roll. Fun at neighborhood playground... Blowing dandelion fluffs. Submitted for... Childhood Nostalgia Poetry Contest Sponsored by JCB Brul Date written: 08/29/2022

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Date: 8/31/2022 2:51:00 PM
Love this imagery Edward, and the fistful of eons ago. Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/31/2022 7:05:00 PM
Thank you very much, Linda:-)
Date: 8/31/2022 12:25:00 PM
"Blowing dandelion fluffs" is truly an emblematic metaphor and image of childhood Edward - one all of us can relate to - wonderful choice of childhood memory! So nicely written! Congratulations! Blessings!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/31/2022 7:05:00 PM
Thank you very much for congrats, wonderful feedback and visit, Sam:-)
Date: 8/31/2022 8:36:00 AM
great imagery , congrats
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/31/2022 11:14:00 AM
Thank you very much, Francine:-)
Date: 8/31/2022 6:03:00 AM
Indeed! Unforgettable ones! Beautifully done. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/31/2022 7:57:00 AM
Thank you very much for the feedback and congrats, Christuraj:-)
Date: 8/31/2022 5:50:00 AM
Telling time with dandelion fluffs was a great memory; thank you for bringing them back in your excellent tanka!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/31/2022 7:56:00 AM
Thank you very much for feedback and visit, Terry:-)
Date: 8/30/2022 3:28:00 PM
Finding dandelions in the yard, one of the few peaceful memories I have. ...thanks Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/30/2022 4:01:00 PM
Something magical about them, for sure. Thanks for the lovely visit, FJ:-)
Date: 8/29/2022 3:49:00 PM
Oh the simple things!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/29/2022 3:56:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely visit, Kim:-)

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