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written for the Glenn Hughes contest sponsored by Robert James L, inspired by the song "dandelion" 

I rise from the white-wine siesta, letting go of the serpentine songs, like a crimson-winged dragonfly lost in the poppy prairies of Persephone, untangling my prisoned heart chained by the churning deceit of Hades’s immortal chains, savoring pomegranate promises, pirouetting through petrichor nirvana, as the sky smells like a saffron rose above the castle of emperors dressed in fallen flowers. Yet the diamonds sometimes are engraved with ominous omens and remorseless remnants, while I return to cinnamon seclusion, dancing to the mood of my moon. O divine dandelion, in your eyes I see suppressed sighs of a splintered sunrise, flickering balmy zephyrs of paradise, as my soul is tied to the softness of your delicate dusk~ like a faithful disciple, forever following your footprints~ while velvety roots of florals face the glows of alchemy, amidst the array of arrows, left as ashes of gold gone cold, and the gracious gusts of gloaming devouring the unscrupulous wounds of a fragranced dawn. I am the aching pigment in your palette of purples, longing for butterfly blurs to bring me back to a kingdom of kindness, where I’ll forever breathe tender lilies rinsed with wind-swept wishes. But amidst the clusters of jewels and raining sakura, tonight I choose to walk with specters of scorching stars, allowing curves of my scarred skin to burn from the blazing breeze that bleeds nefarious narratives upon the bleached borders. So watch me waltz into the infernal waters of the deep, bruised bay. There I’ll write an elegy, for the sorrow that swallowed your spirit. I will find an anchor to pull you back to the land of paper lanterns as I surrender to the haunting hues of the horizon; the sweet sacrifice of a beloved blackbird singing farewell in silence to save you from the devilish underworld. As dandelion dreams are designed in lucid lies, carving my essence into wintry wires of woes and verdicts from the growing vines of a villainous valley. I feel the blackbird weep, it’s everything I see the blackbird quiver, it’s what you bring dreary d a n d e l i o n

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Date: 12/8/2024 6:06:00 AM
Nice win. You've missed your calling. Shoulda been a heavy metal star ;)
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Date: 12/6/2024 11:10:00 PM
I was so sure I commented on this one but I didn't see my comment now! Anyway you were so inspired with this one, Ink. Big congrats to you.
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Date: 12/6/2024 11:26:00 AM
Congratulations Ink on your well deserved contest win. xx
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Date: 12/6/2024 5:53:00 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your well-deserved trophy win, dearest Ink.
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Date: 12/6/2024 12:33:00 AM
You are amply rewarded with a trophy for your yen for excellent versification which not many can emulate. So happy for your achievement. Hearty Congratulations, sweet Empress!
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Date: 12/5/2024 4:54:00 PM
congratulations on your top win dear poet. awesome write, transcendent it is. Cheers.
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Date: 12/5/2024 12:49:00 PM
From the title, (which is the name of a fav tea) ha, to the very ending, you have met the challenge , with such always fun alliteration and lyrics for the new version, sung. but if I must pick a line "There I’ll write an elegy, for the sorrow that swallowed your spirit" "But amidst the clusters of jewels and raining sakura, tonight I choose to walk with specters of scorching stars," you are so bright, even the dramatic is sweetened by your beautiful vibe, Ink! Congratulations on your trophy win! Let's clink glasses of champagne nodding my head :)
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Date: 12/5/2024 1:05:00 PM
Dear anaya, this is such a beautiful and kind comment and i am truly grateful for your sweetness. Thank you for reading and for also pointing out your fave lines. I haven’t been writing much for soup contests so to receive this trophy really was an honor. Sending you light today and always
Date: 12/5/2024 7:36:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your well-deserved trophy win dear Ink. Your ink never fades. Cheers!^___^ JCB
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Date: 12/5/2024 1:03:00 PM
This is so sweet of you to come back again to congratulate and also loved your comment below too. You are such a kind soul! Thank you so very much truly
Date: 12/5/2024 6:46:00 AM
Few care about poetry as much as you do… you craft each and every word so meticulously!!! Okay, maybe many care about poetry… but you sure do love it well. Congratulations on your trophy win with this beautiful piece. I read it again often as I love the words you have chosen. I look forward to your entry into my next Glenn Hughes contest!!!
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Date: 12/5/2024 1:02:00 PM
This is such a kind thing for you to say, and i truly appreciate the inspiration and also the placement as ive mentioned also on your blog! Thank you so very much and definitely will writ for next contest, sending you light always
Date: 12/4/2024 6:28:00 PM
Whoah, this is soooo good, Ink. I loved the end...and such beautiful alliteration throughout. <3
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Date: 12/4/2024 4:30:00 AM
This masterpiece is simply divine! I love the "aching pigment in pallet of purples". Alliteration at its best! That will surely mesmerized poets who paint not just with pen but with brush. I love it. This is definitely a FAVE! Warm wishes ^___^ JCB
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Date: 12/4/2024 4:18:00 AM
Dear Empress this is too deep for me. Your release from Hades, the underworld ruled by Persephone, breaking the immortal chains and rising like a crimson winged butterfly and your sympathy for the neglected dandelion is all what I could understand. When I read your poems I wonder what wealth of poetry you are endowed with which is beyond the grasp of a poet like me. I can only say that you have used stunning metaphors..... too complex.
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Date: 12/3/2024 2:59:00 PM
Dandelions are strong and resilient flowers Ink, not easy to eradicate, still a beautiful flower, nicely penned gl in the contest dear heart L)
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Date: 12/3/2024 2:49:00 PM
Brilliantly composed poem, dearest Ink, with vivid visuals and terrific language. Due to my diverse dealings, I possess profound compassion for the dandelion. The fervent feelings fueling the fight to save this flower's fate are formidable. The bloom's brilliant ability to blow seeds into the breeze beckons me to bask in the beauty of a world filled with paper lanterns.
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Date: 12/3/2024 1:15:00 PM
Beautifully written IE, with stunning imagery, Must look for that one on YouTube. Good luck in the contest. Hope your week is going well. Tom
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Date: 12/3/2024 11:19:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Dandelion Dreams" write. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Date: 12/3/2024 11:16:00 AM
Why am I feeling sorry for the dandelion. In saying that, the dandelion does possess a lot of hidden qualities, and I'm even told it can be very therapeutic and even hypnotic. Great write.
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Date: 12/3/2024 7:02:00 AM
IE, I'm feeling a huge amount of empathy for the dandelion that comes from experience. I'm in awe of all the emotion attached to salvage the existence of this flower. I also am thinking about the land of paper lanterns and the seeds that scatter to the wind from that part of the flower. Smiles!
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Date: 12/3/2024 6:46:00 AM
'Dandelion floats on the suppressed sighs and splintered sunrise as balmy zephyrs take it skyward', Wonderful write Ink
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Date: 12/3/2024 3:09:00 AM
crimson-winged dragonfly lost in the poppy prairies of Persephone, ooooo .. untangling my prisoned heart chained by the churning deceit of Hades’s immortal chains, the mythical element is breathtaking here papiiii!! divine dandelion, in your eyes I see suppressed sighs.. dayuuuuum how u bleed such beauty papii!! I am the aching pigment in your palette of purples,oooo forever breathe tender lilies rinsed with wind-swept wishes. papi!!! That’s sexyyy! waltz into the infernal waters of the deep, bruised bay. The imagery!!! Mmmmmm!! carving my essence into wintry wires of woes and verdicts from the growing vines of a villainous valley… an absolute beauty papi!!!
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Date: 12/3/2024 2:39:00 AM
Amazing write
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