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Dancing With the Wind

The waves of the trees Rustle Crackle Break. The girl Steps a foot, And the wind Steps with her. Dancing with the wind. Twirling with the wind The sky, The rain, And the Earth Dance with her. Her hair has turned To breeze. Her mind filled With the song Of the voices Lifted by the wind. Her toes do not Touch the ground As she dances As the wind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/5/2014 5:03:00 AM
ghostly, dreamy and light footed! Maybe there is a thought of unpredictability in you!
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Date: 7/18/2013 4:55:00 PM
Heather, I would have placed this higher..loved it. congrats. BG
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Date: 7/17/2013 5:32:00 PM
Congrats with your awesome win... luv~ LINDA
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Date: 7/17/2013 4:36:00 PM
Congratulations with your dancing poem in Giorgio V's contest. have yourself a nice one ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 7/1/2013 4:45:00 AM
I really like this one. Short, sweet, simple and to the point. What else would you want to ask out of a poem. jthorn5656@atmc.net
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