Dancing with Daisies


Across the valley, green pasture and the hills
I imagine dancing to freedom I feel
Lifting my toes in the daisies, full of thrills

Along the river, my spirit flows surreal
It's a taste of heaven on land around me
I imagine dancing to freedom I feel

In the sky, large birds soar so effortlessly
Peace comes naturally, not something I chase
It's a taste of heaven on land around me

I stand strong in the heights, bad things I erase
Enjoying a new life with things I create
Peace comes naturally, not something I chase

I'm part of life's production, lessons and fate
I'm becoming everything I want to be
Enjoying a new life with things I create

My mind absorbs the landscape, all that I see
Across the valley, green pasture and the hills
I'm becoming everything I want to be
Lifting my toes in the daisies, full of thrills

Heidi Sands

4/29/25

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May Avatar
May 2, 2025 at 6:47 PM
I feel the freedom in this this write, as you dance to nature's beautiful scenes, hugs
Sands Avatar
May 3, 2025 at 6:32 AM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your kind comments . Hugs :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 30, 2025 at 6:56 PM
Joyful! I take in the landscape!
Sands Avatar
April 30, 2025 at 7:20 PM
Thank you Kim! Great to hear. I hope you have a nice night :)
Wolf Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 7:51 PM
Love the refrain of 'I'm becoming everything I want to be,' Heidi. Bravo, Gershon
Sands Avatar
April 30, 2025 at 5:50 AM
Thank you Gershon. I hope you have a nice day :)
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April 29, 2025 at 3:30 PM
Hello Heidi oh this is a fun poem. i can vision yhou dancing among the daisies. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 30, 2025 at 6:12 AM
Hello Heidi, You are very welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
Sands Avatar
April 30, 2025 at 5:49 AM
Thank you very much Darlene. I appreciate your kind comments :) hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 11:17 AM
What a wonderful "Dancing with Daisies" write. Pretty Picture... It looks and sounds so peaceful. Wish I was there. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Hugs... Have a lovely day writing away..................
Sands Avatar
April 30, 2025 at 5:48 AM
Hi Paula. Thank you very much. I wish you were here to enjoy it too. Hugs :)
Andresen Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 8:41 AM
- I can almost see you dancing with joy, Heidi ... love it :) - hugs
Sands Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 9:16 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise. I feel like I can. I appreciate your kind comment. Have a great day. Hugs :)
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April 29, 2025 at 5:51 AM
That’s so lovely Heidi, keep enjoying nature’s thrills… Beryl
Sands Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 6:38 AM
Thank you Beryl :)
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April 29, 2025 at 5:45 AM
Submitted 4/29/25
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