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Dancing with Daisies

Across the valley, green pasture and the hills I imagine dancing to freedom I feel Lifting my toes in the daisies, full of thrills Along the river, my spirit flows surreal It's a taste of heaven on land around me I imagine dancing to freedom I feel In the sky, large birds soar so effortlessly Peace comes naturally, not something I chase It's a taste of heaven on land around me I stand strong in the heights, bad things I erase Enjoying a new life with things I create Peace comes naturally, not something I chase I'm part of life's production, lessons and fate I'm becoming everything I want to be Enjoying a new life with things I create My mind absorbs the landscape, all that I see Across the valley, green pasture and the hills I'm becoming everything I want to be Lifting my toes in the daisies, full of thrills Heidi Sands 4/29/25 (C)opyright

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Date: 4/29/2025 7:51:00 PM
Love the refrain of 'I'm becoming everything I want to be,' Heidi. Bravo, Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/30/2025 5:50:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 4/29/2025 3:30:00 PM
Hello Heidi oh this is a fun poem. i can vision yhou dancing among the daisies. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/30/2025 6:12:00 AM
Hello Heidi, You are very welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/30/2025 5:49:00 AM
Thank you very much Darlene. I appreciate your kind comments :) hugs
Date: 4/29/2025 11:17:00 AM
What a wonderful "Dancing with Daisies" write. Pretty Picture... It looks and sounds so peaceful. Wish I was there. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Hugs... Have a lovely day writing away..................
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/30/2025 5:48:00 AM
Hi Paula. Thank you very much. I wish you were here to enjoy it too. Hugs :)
Date: 4/29/2025 8:41:00 AM
- I can almost see you dancing with joy, Heidi ... love it :) - hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/29/2025 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise. I feel like I can. I appreciate your kind comment. Have a great day. Hugs :)
Date: 4/29/2025 5:51:00 AM
That’s so lovely Heidi, keep enjoying nature’s thrills… Beryl
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/29/2025 6:38:00 AM
Thank you Beryl :)
Date: 4/29/2025 5:45:00 AM
Submitted 4/29/25
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