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Dancing with Daisies


Across the valley, green pasture and the hills
I imagine dancing to freedom I feel
Lifting my toes in the daisies, full of thrills

Along the river, my spirit flows surreal
It's a taste of heaven on land around me
I imagine dancing to freedom I feel

In the sky, large birds soar so effortlessly
Peace comes naturally, not something I chase
It's a taste of heaven on land around me

I stand strong in the heights, bad things I erase
Enjoying a new life with things I create
Peace comes naturally, not something I chase

I'm part of life's production, lessons and fate
I'm becoming everything I want to be
Enjoying a new life with things I create

My mind absorbs the landscape, all that I see
Across the valley, green pasture and the hills
I'm becoming everything I want to be
Lifting my toes in the daisies, full of thrills

Heidi Sands

4/29/25

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Joseph May

Date: 5/2/2025 6:47:00 PM

I feel the freedom in this this write, as you dance to nature's beautiful scenes, hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/3/2025 6:32:00 AM

Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your kind comments . Hugs :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/30/2025 6:56:00 PM

Joyful! I take in the landscape!

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/30/2025 7:20:00 PM

Thank you Kim! Great to hear. I hope you have a nice night :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/29/2025 7:51:00 PM

Love the refrain of 'I'm becoming everything I want to be,' Heidi. Bravo, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/30/2025 5:50:00 AM

Thank you Gershon. I hope you have a nice day :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/29/2025 3:30:00 PM

Hello Heidi oh this is a fun poem. i can vision yhou dancing among the daisies. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/30/2025 6:12:00 AM

Hello Heidi, You are very welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/30/2025 5:49:00 AM

Thank you very much Darlene. I appreciate your kind comments :) hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/29/2025 11:17:00 AM

What a wonderful "Dancing with Daisies" write. Pretty Picture... It looks and sounds so peaceful. Wish I was there. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Hugs... Have a lovely day writing away..................

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/30/2025 5:48:00 AM

Hi Paula. Thank you very much. I wish you were here to enjoy it too. Hugs :)