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Dancing With Daisies

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The three poetry forms used are haiku, tanka and sijo. whirling in daisies multicolored blooms in hair summertime affair Caressing petals Light steps frolic in beauty as breezes chase blooms. Raspberry days so fruity Clouds stand still for yellow sheen. Blue jay and red cardinal sing songs of zesty frolic, against a pretty backdrop of emerald green and slow motion. Daisies of every color and kind dance all through gold days.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/28/2024 6:24:00 AM

Every so often I enjoy the pic that goes with the poem! So lovely! Joy if exuberant in that first verse, a whirling, twirling, beauty with multicolored blooms! Loved: Raspberry days so fruity. Again the poem sings in final verse with two birds, colors, slow motion, song and dance! A fave, Evelyn!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/28/2024 12:58:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Your gracious words make my heart sing. :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 12/27/2023 10:12:00 PM

just wonderful and artful, thanks for sharing talented poems, merry christmas evelyn

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/28/2023 8:59:00 PM

Thank you for the very nice comments and Christmas greetings, Yann. I hope your holiday season is wonderful, too. :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/24/2023 9:18:00 AM

Truly a beautiful kaleidoscope of whirling, dancing colorful daisies and birds that "frolic," "dance" and "sing." Love the three different forms of poetry whose images blend into a colorful palette of delight! Thank you for these moments of loveliness, Evelyn! Merry Christmas.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/24/2023 1:14:00 PM

Thank you for your very gratifying remarks, my friend. Your sunshine infused words have brightened my day. Merry Christmas!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/22/2023 1:30:00 PM

A creative/fun write/pretty flowers. Good Luck... Looks like we both this one. Merry Christmas.....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/23/2023 12:39:00 AM

Thank you so much for the happy thoughts and well wishes, Paula. Good luck to you, too. Merry Christmas!

Silent One

Date: 12/21/2023 12:49:00 PM

Oh wow so much colour and so much imagery.. this must be for that contest.. you have really done well on these and chose 3 great forms to use... I think this one will be a top winner.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/21/2023 6:03:00 PM

Many thanks for your kind thoughts and your rousing vote of confidence. What a thrill it is to read your comment. A Merry Christmas to you and yours.

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/21/2023 12:47:00 PM

Evelyn, your exquisite imagery evokes a profound sense of beauty. Executed in the 3 haikus. May the joyous spirit of the Holidays imbue you and your loved ones with felicity and grant you robust well-being and prosperity in the forthcoming year.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/21/2023 5:57:00 PM

I appreciate your kind thoughts so much, Sotto. Happy Holidays!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/21/2023 5:29:00 AM

Beautiful images, Evelyn. Splendidly done in three forms.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/21/2023 5:54:00 PM

It thrills me to know you enjoyed this, Vijay. Thank you. Merry Christmas.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/20/2023 9:57:00 PM

Ah this is so beautiful, artistic and soulfully divine! I love the colors and the vibe in this. So soothing and lyrical too. I can see daisies and different colors and how you’ve described that is so poetic and beautiful especially “ Raspberry days so fruity Clouds stand still for yellow sheen.“ just stunning! “ backdrop of emerald green “ i see that through your words! Definitely a fave this is

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/21/2023 5:52:00 PM

Such a joy to read your heartwarming remarks, Ink! Thank you so much for expressing your pleasure in this poem, and also for the delight of your fave. A blessed Christmas to you and yours. :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/20/2023 7:37:00 PM

Awwn, I feel like I'm too, dancing with daises, after reading your eloquently perfumed poem..Ahh, my heart is melting in the exquisite fragrances of all the flowery fairies that you've described here. Such magically vivid imageries you've painted with your brush-quill and these colours truly come alive in my eyes..with so much splendor! "whirling in daisies","Raspberry days so fruity","Clouds stand still for yellow sheen"I absolutely adore your writing style, dear Evelyn, this is a FAV for me :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/21/2023 5:41:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely remarks, and for the pleasure of your fave, my friend. I'm so happy that this poem struck a chord with you. Your comments made me smile. :)