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Dancing Toward Delight

Dancing toward delight In touch with her utter most soul Her bliss preceded her into restaurants And her laughter rang out loudly, Echoing down halls of selfishness and sorrow Eliminating any need for any other emotion Except pure delight that she had found love And was in the throes of herself Excited beyond belief In touch with her merriest self Her delight pranced into conversations Smiles began as she entered alleyways Seriousness gone, nothing but the pure fun of being herself, taking everyone captive Coaxing them to prance their own dance and live in her world of pure enthusiasm

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Douglas Pederson

Date: 4/16/2019 11:50:00 AM

zest for dance and thirst for discovery of my inner self. I find this very solid and relates to introspection of our reserved qualities. well tuned in as you are.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/16/2019 1:18:00 PM

Thank you so much Douglas. if there is one person I know, she is sitting in my chair.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 4/14/2019 12:27:00 AM

This is a high energy frolicking poem that you captured in strokes of dramatic. 3rd line: did you want proceed rather than precluded? This is me being helpful, we all have pesky keyboards that often fail to know what we are thinking. I enjoyed the poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/14/2019 1:12:00 AM

I also meant preceded, that's funny to me. It's 2:11 and I usually nap around 2 so I'm going down, that is where I am bound.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/14/2019 12:44:00 AM

I am racing up there to look. But why are we both AWAKE at this weird time, CayCay? I meant neither precluded or proceeded. I mean preceded, so I was glad you let me know so I could fix it. Thank you my friend!