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Dancing Sky

Sky that’s beyond me Screams with ultimate color Fierce display flowing along Lights and darks painted Dancing with the clouds themselves Creates a grand show for me Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/6/2011 1:30:00 PM
Very pretty! Love your word choice and the pictures they create, especially 'dancing with the clouds themselves' great visual :)
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Date: 9/28/2011 7:45:00 PM
As you say Russ, the ever changing color and shape of clouds has a fascination that hard to beat. I remember finding faces and animals et. in the clouds which was such fun. Lovely verse dear friend! :)
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Date: 9/27/2011 11:45:00 PM
wonderful imagery jumps out from the page to the eye of the reader Russell.. amazing lines luv..
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Date: 9/27/2011 10:55:00 PM
I can just picture it, Russel. A lovely display!
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Date: 9/27/2011 9:27:00 PM
beauty. for real. ~N
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Date: 9/27/2011 9:23:00 PM
Sounds like the most beautiful sunset!! Lovely sky, and a lovely poem!! :)
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