Dancing Shoes

Dancing every day Of her short eleven years Her worn shoes are stilled

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Date: 4/19/2010 4:17:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Joyce. Wishing you the best in the contest. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol

Date: 4/18/2010 11:19:00 PM

LOVE IT!! andrea

Date: 4/18/2010 8:49:00 PM

Nice , Nice , Nice ~~~WINNER~~~Imagery deluxe, I love it ( she did have a wonderful career) Love , faith and hope~~~~~~~~~Rick

Date: 4/18/2010 10:50:00 AM

Great idea in this one...Should do well in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Date: 4/18/2010 10:03:00 AM

This heart-breaker, makes such a statement in so few words! Well done, Joyce! Love, Carrie

Date: 4/18/2010 8:20:00 AM

So sad and very touching, Joyce. You gave a very unique perspective on the photo and I wish you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Date: 4/18/2010 8:15:00 AM

Well penned haiku. Good luck in the contest