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DANCING ON AIR-LOVE STORY

        Just waiting in line to register for college courses. I did not relish such crowded coarseness. Then, mon Dieux, my eyes fixed upon you, lost was I! Your brown eyes, made me feel like I was flying in the rainbows Of a star phantasmagorical sky. No, I told myself, I was imagining such things... But fate arranged our years together, beyond my limited imaginings! We lived and loved together under sunny and rainy kweather. We were somehow born to be soul-tethered. Cooked quiche Lorraine, salads so divine amd kthe best part was, at bedtime, This old fashioned girl was thine, and totally shined. You got me to attend the Old Town School of Folk Music and learned to play guitar. You introduced me to Second City, where I was to ibecame a minor improvisational star. We studied Baba Ram Das and went to sensitivity trainings. My life with you was neither boring nor draining! We blew weed and went to see the "Yellow Submarine", together. Came out laughing so hard, we walked home in the rainy weather! You gave me my first cat, Luvey, my first sweet Calico, Hal, the fantastic, far-out life I had with you,was quite the show. For my birthday, a book of great poetry ....Kahlil Gibran, so cool! Thanks Hal, for loving me and never treating me like a fool. I will forever hold you in my beating heart, From my inner soul, there is a gem-filled Hal part! With you, I was forever dancing on freshest air.  We were on the wings of time, a rare, loving special pair!            11- 13- 2020

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Date: 11/13/2020 5:37:00 PM
So beautiful and touching. Such unconditional love. Stunning poem myndear friend! Love Chantelle
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/14/2020 6:09:00 PM
Thankd.. Love, Pangie
Date: 11/13/2020 4:49:00 PM
Hal sounds like a fantastic soul mate, I feel he is delighted and reading this.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/14/2020 6:08:00 PM
He was both. And we both were curious and adventursone souls, who went our own ways. We both ended,ulp in CA. He has a Masters and I have a bachelors. He is a fun person. Hal is one of the reasons I am still alive today, Love, Pangie xx
Date: 11/13/2020 4:25:00 PM
Lovely write.. so many memories so sweet and gentle to the soul. God bless you dear lady, with many many precious thoughts
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/14/2020 6:01:00 PM
This was but a smattering of a few. Thank you Panhie xxx
Date: 11/13/2020 1:17:00 PM
Wow what a time you had together, how wonderful to be young and in love mmmmm... so special. Enjoyed reading about your unforgetable life together dear Panagiota. Thank you for sharing these precious memories. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/14/2020 5:56:00 PM
Anne, we did unusual things together.. What a great man. I was very specific in this one. Perhaps too mich so! I could have written meaningless stanzas. I don't write that way, I too earthy? Love Pamgie xx Love, Pamgid xx
Date: 11/13/2020 11:52:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, a wonderful romantic poem. Hugs DarlenexxXX-OOOO.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/14/2020 5:51:00 PM
LOL
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/14/2020 12:15:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, Oh...you were thinking of not creating poetry? Well that is up to you. Then when you think this -you change your mind. Understand. Hugs Darlene.xxxx-oooo.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/13/2020 12:39:00 PM
I appreciate that Darlene but its far more. Who's that blatantly honest in a poem? I wonder if others will see it beyond romance? Doubtful! Better to write something that means nothing, I am thinking tomorrow is my last day,but then I always think that, LOL...pinhead Pangie )))
Date: 11/13/2020 11:18:00 AM
An amazing love story Panagiota, happy happy memories. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/13/2020 11:37:00 AM
These are so vivid! Glad he was in my life. He will always be. Very impactful relationship.... Lunch coming soon.i see you are featured poet.Awesome Tom. I will hit 1,700 Poems tomorrow of more. Like who cares? Me! What an accomplishment. Thanks for being with me far more than just commenting. It's your sucess as well as mine.. Love, Pangie