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Dancing In the Rain

Can you hear the thunder? The smell of rain tickles my nose. The strikes of lightning brightens the sky. There is a storm coming our way. Ah yes, the wind blows the treetops. It rushes through my long blonde hair. Another bolt lights up the horizon! Should I run and seek shelter? As the first drop of rain falls, The thunder and lightning intensifies. I open my mouth to quench my thirst With the sweet taste of falling water. I am lured into thinking I hear music. I have no fear as I lift my arms in the air. My body begins to sway with closed eyes. The raindrops are soaking my skin. I drift closer to the sound of the skies. My movements are becoming enhanced. Like a sprite, I am dancing in a wet forest. To the beat of this sensual summer rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/2/2011 12:56:00 AM
I love it. I like the imagery, and how light it is. The words sort of dance around in my head. It's wonderful.
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Date: 7/31/2011 12:10:00 PM
i like this , uplifting innocence, a good write, lovely poem
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