dancing in the rain

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Written on June 27, 2025

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what the world loves
nette onclaud

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pelting the sidewalk
streams of gentling rain
music who will stalk
dancing through the pain
floods roll as we rock

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Karen Jones

Date: 6/29/2025 1:34:00 PM

Love this! Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2025 12:21:00 PM

I love this. It's rhythmical like the rain. Big congrats, Regina

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/29/2025 9:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "dancing in the rain" write. Great Picture.... Have a blessed day with your win.......

Crystol Woods

Date: 6/29/2025 6:37:00 AM

The first line is killer... love it! Xo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/28/2025 7:44:00 PM

Congrats!

Len Gasun

Date: 6/28/2025 6:37:00 PM

Gorgeous one! I love it and so enjoyed. Thanks a lot for sharing my dear poet friend! Big congrats on your well-deserved first place win! Hugs and cheers! God bless you always and your poetry!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/27/2025 9:01:00 AM

Love that second line! Hugs ~ Kim