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Dancing In the Golden Sun

mosaic morning brown eyed button sunflowers still dancing for a while in the soft golden sun

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/6/2011 8:34:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Gregory. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and inspiration to continue your poetry. Love, Carol

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 5/5/2011 4:44:00 PM

A well set scene indeed; quite poetic and richly descriptive. I like it!

Stephen Parker

Date: 5/5/2011 4:04:00 PM

Concise display of natural splendor! The phrase 'brown eyes dancing in the golden sun' is regaling. Did you mean that the brown buttons were dancing in the yellow frills? If so, then this is an eloquent description! I would like that interpretation a lot better than the flowers dancing under the sunlight.

Gregory Golden
Date: 3/11/2021 4:55:00 PM

Hello Stephen, well I really like your interpretation, analysis and, your zest for my short poem. Indeed, the answer is yes! I hope you find time to evaluate some of my other short poems. I do not like writing very long poems