Dancing In Amber Fields

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Across great plains, in rich soil valleys beneath breathtaking, bold painted skies amber cobras dance on graceful stems swaying to refrains of flowing rhapsodies Mariah plays for them on a whimsical flute whistling notes float along on wind songs hypnotized by her gentle rhythmic breezes they bend and dip in choreographed allegro

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Supraja Kannan

Date: 6/11/2017 6:39:00 AM

Such a beautiful imagery... So beautifully expressed... Loved it Lin... Glad to read you today...

Lin Lane
Date: 6/11/2017 7:16:00 AM

Thank you, Supraja. I appreciate your visit and comments.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/10/2017 7:58:00 PM

your images dance off the page Lin- amber cobras - what an incredible description - I too don't like snakes of any sort but these sound absolutely gorgeous:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 6/11/2017 7:16:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Jan. I think snakes are beautiful, but at a distance.

Darren White

Date: 6/10/2017 1:20:00 PM

Love pastorals with whimsical whistling, I like your language and way with words in general.

Lin Lane
Date: 6/10/2017 4:04:00 PM

How kind you are with your remarks, Darren. Thank you ever so much.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/10/2017 1:01:00 PM

A beautiful poem this is. :)

Lin Lane
Date: 6/10/2017 4:03:00 PM

I appreciate your thinking it, Heidi. Thanks.

Tim Smith

Date: 6/10/2017 12:03:00 PM

Awesome Lin...love the amber cobra image...a snake was waiting for me when I went out the back door this morning...I cant get away from them...lol

Lin Lane
Date: 6/10/2017 12:17:00 PM

Ohhh, Tim. I'm so glad you saw it. At least it wasn't a cobra. I make light, but I don't like snakes of any kind. Thank you for liking this write, despite the snakes.