Dancing Horses

Dancing Horses
Moving to 
"The Trumpeter's Lullaby"
Carry me away
Onto the clouds
Let me fly
In the chariot
Of Dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Itticheria Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 3:11 PM
Very beautiful poem Sara,so lively and capturing the momentum.Great imagination as high as the sky.Best wishes. Chacko
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September 28, 2009 at 6:04 PM
Absolutely Lovely Sara... Your last line reminded me of Van Geilis (don't know spelling) Chariots of Fire... I loved that Song and the Movie... MoonBee
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September 28, 2009 at 11:20 AM
Nice poem,Sara. It reminds Me of being at the Carnival, on the Carousel, the part about the horses dancing to the "Trumpeter's Lullaby". Instantly, I catch a glimpse of Myself riding in the same fashion. Once again, great poem. Karin Edwards
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September 28, 2009 at 8:03 AM
Thank you for sharing your heartfelt poetry Sara. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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September 27, 2009 at 11:40 PM
A delightfilled poem Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words
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September 27, 2009 at 8:38 AM
Congrats on your success in Sami's contest Sara.Rgds Brian
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September 27, 2009 at 7:23 AM
Sara, this is a delightful verse. Keep writing girl >> James
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September 27, 2009 at 7:09 AM
Hi Sara, A beautiful dream!! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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September 27, 2009 at 6:50 AM
You wrote here again a lovely poem. Keen to read more! And thank you for commenting "Highlands"....Gert
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