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Haiku 9 - Dancing For Love

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Costa's hummingbirds twisting, swooping and dancing - males mate in seconds

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Date: 3/7/2021 10:42:00 PM
Lovely haiku. Great imagery
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Date: 3/7/2021 3:34:00 AM
Victor, a sweet hummingbird haiku, love the imagery!
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Date: 3/7/2021 1:29:00 AM
Swift love is in the air when hummingbirds are there... Good Haiku Victor ~ Belle
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Date: 3/6/2021 2:58:00 PM
Wonderful written haiku, Victor. Hummingbirds are cute. Hope you're having a great weekend :)
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Date: 3/6/2021 12:07:00 PM
A charming haiku, which brings a smile. :)
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Date: 3/6/2021 9:45:00 AM
They are sure speedy lovers! This was cute. I am having another busy week and it's killing me not to see more poets here . Once hubbie finds work again, I think things can be normal. When he is at home with me, I don't have much time for Soup!
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Date: 3/5/2021 9:26:00 PM
they flutter so fast how do they manage. Great imagery, Victor.
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Date: 3/5/2021 9:13:00 PM
LOvely haiku, Victor.
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Date: 3/5/2021 7:59:00 PM
Simply beautiful
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Date: 3/5/2021 3:41:00 PM
Kinda like some human lovers. *lol*
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Date: 3/5/2021 3:13:00 PM
Ahh!! Interesting information. I wonder if they help with caring for the young? Enjoyed reading your work. Sara
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Date: 3/5/2021 2:40:00 PM
Love this Victor. My grandmother loved hummingbirds and her garden was full of them. Lovely. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/5/2021 12:07:00 PM
Hi Victor, Your Haiku resonates the beauty and joy of a hummingbirds existence. "twisting, swooping and dancing - males mate in seconds". I love it! Take Care, Paulette
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Date: 3/5/2021 11:45:00 AM
Hi Victor, What a lovely haiku; your words and the photo mesh well together. Have a wonderful day and weekend, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/5/2021 11:39:00 AM
I bet they do! xx
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Date: 3/5/2021 10:40:00 AM
- Should want to see this dance - we do not have this beautiful bird, Victor - A beautiful haiku :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/5/2021 6:23:00 AM
A fine display, the males will be chirping with delight. Tom
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Date: 3/5/2021 6:18:00 AM
Lovely haiku. God bless you. Love, Gina
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