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Dancing Flame

In the cool room of winter Flame starts dancing in the fireplace Swinging legs and arms with pace Swaying hands and shoulders Like a lovely lady dancer Follow her tender smiling face Her warmth touches the nearby’s Cold skin that grins to reply She hums a song Makes her follower becharming With a single’s lyric to caress Her sweet mateless In the silent night dreaming Outdoors the wind inquirer Raps the window with jealousy Pretty flame and her follower Xaysouvanh Phengphong 22 October 2013

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Date: 12/10/2013 4:17:00 AM
Congrats on the win,
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Date: 12/9/2013 5:45:00 PM
Hi Xay, enjoying this one again. , Thanks for understanding and having patience with me. I'm sending hugs from the bottom of my heart. I am very sorry I kept all my winning poems on standby. LOL, Had a MAD headache. wink! wink! .... Congratulations.... If you have time, please enjoy my Hot & Cute blog.. Called. "Fire Sister." take care and enjoy this win -- xox.LINDA
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Date: 11/24/2013 9:47:00 AM
Hello, Xaysouvanh, dancing flames... Such an amazing poem.. I love it! , I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. "Playing with Fire" You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/24/2013 8:06:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Xaysouvanh ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Xaysouvanh Phengphong
Date: 11/24/2013 8:09:00 AM
Hi Skat, Nice to meet you in Poetrysoup... Let me introduce myself in: laoampilotwriter.blogspot.com Have a nice day!
Date: 11/24/2013 7:48:00 AM
Xay,, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Xaysouvanh Phengphong
Date: 11/24/2013 8:11:00 AM
I submitted too slow... sorry SKAT LOVE

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