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Dancing Feet

Millions of feet dancing.. Like raindrops on my hand On a emerald green stage for contest Insect on a leaf

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/12/2010 8:41:00 AM
wow what a picture, well done on the Haiku, nicely done,..p.d
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Date: 4/28/2010 6:52:00 AM
Oh I love your imagination!! This is my fav I think, there are so many good ones!! I would hate to have to judge the contest.
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Date: 4/28/2010 6:39:00 AM
Nice new friend and fellow poet what you have here is a very loverly ;) broken up sentence. This site will help you understand that 5/7/5 is not the only requirement for haiku. (I did it wrong for 2 years ..blush) Hope this helps Light & Love http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/haiku/haiku.html
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Date: 4/28/2010 5:14:00 AM
short and beautiful and thank you for sharing it. Enjoy your morning.:)
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Date: 4/27/2010 6:43:00 PM
What a beautiful and original way to look at the picture :) Good luck in the contest. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 4/27/2010 5:21:00 PM
Good use of imagery for a creative perspective. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 4/27/2010 3:44:00 PM
Love it !!!!! This is so far, my favorite!!! :) Great work, Michael !!
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Date: 4/27/2010 2:18:00 PM
Great interpertation of the picture..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara
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