Dancing Feet

Millions of feet dancing..
Like raindrops on my hand
On a emerald green stage



for contest Insect on a leaf
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May 12, 2010 at 8:41 AM
wow what a picture, well done on the Haiku, nicely done,..p.d
Culverhouse Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 6:52 AM
Oh I love your imagination!! This is my fav I think, there are so many good ones!! I would hate to have to judge the contest.
Guzzi Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 6:39 AM
Nice new friend and fellow poet what you have here is a very loverly ;) broken up sentence. This site will help you understand that 5/7/5 is not the only requirement for haiku. (I did it wrong for 2 years ..blush) Hope this helps Light & Love http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/haiku/haiku.html
Burton Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 5:14 AM
short and beautiful and thank you for sharing it. Enjoy your morning.:)
Scripca Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 6:43 PM
What a beautiful and original way to look at the picture :) Good luck in the contest. Love, Iolanda
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April 27, 2010 at 5:21 PM
Good use of imagery for a creative perspective. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
Richards Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 3:44 PM
Love it !!!!! This is so far, my favorite!!! :) Great work, Michael !!
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 2:18 PM
Great interpertation of the picture..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara
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