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Dancing Coins

Will you accept?
Not a challenge 
Rather an invitation
Let us explore each other's thoughts
Are we oil and water?
Will we have a meeting of the minds?
They say men and women are not the same
Do we both not bleed?
Do we not see the same sky?
Smell the same scents?
Strive for the same things?
I extend out my hand
I beg you, please don't turn away
I am trusting you with a part of me
Let us dance
Twirl along the page

A part of me and more
I lay here at your door
Your proposal is sweet
Oh, let our minds now meet
An invitation to dance
Is such a golden chance
To let rhythm and rhyme
Keep us dancing in time
Gender does not matter
Perceptions we will shatter
When it comes to poetry
We are the same entity
With words we are in love
Touched by inspiration's dove
We exude beauty fair
As our poetic souls we bare
My words a gift to you
You know just what to do
Oil and water don't combine
Each is unique and sublime
But they mix when making bread
By which hungry minds are fed
A sweet blessing our words bring
We can make the heavens sing

Like you, I am a lover of words
Looking for diamonds to capture light
Each word placed creates our delight
A symphony of colors shining bright
In the end I have a spirit of oil within
Long ago I permeated my lover's skin
She and I are now a we
From her comes the sweetness you see
You and I, opposite sides of similar coins
Separate, yet in subtle ways we are joined
Two coins jingle, create a sound
Tossed to the sky yet still Earth bound  
As we share what's on our minds
Only heaven knows what treasure we will find

Treasures don't lie on the ground
Buried deep, they must be found
The one with a passionate heart
Will get all, not just a part
Opposites attract, I'm told
Our poems, treasures of gold
You have stories and I have mine
Poem gems, sparkle and shine
Your love speaks to you; mine to me
Our ballads of sweet harmony
The treasure is this, our dance
Unsure, we still took a chance
You took the lead, steps just right
This dance with you, a sheer delight!



A joint poem with my friend Eileen Ghali, thanks for the dance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/8/2014 9:40:00 AM
Way back when...This is when the Soup was magical. Miss those days. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/8/2014 4:04:00 PM
Me too!
Date: 2/11/2014 6:35:00 PM
Way to go with this winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2014 9:38:00 PM
Thanks Sara.
Date: 2/11/2014 1:57:00 PM
Congratulations Rick and Eileen! What a beautiful conversation and a great concept for a collaborative poem! It sings!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2014 9:39:00 PM
Thanks Roy.
Date: 10/13/2013 10:43:00 PM
I'm remembering the dance! :) Good times, Richard....good times! :) :) :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2014 9:40:00 PM
Congratulations Eileen!
Date: 10/7/2013 5:14:00 AM
wow! Just simply WOW...Congratulations on your well deserved win. This is a unique collaboration, indeed!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/7/2013 8:06:00 AM
I'm pleased you like it Hanitra.
Date: 10/7/2013 1:24:00 AM
This is great! Beautiful! Excellent teamwork - I really like it. Congrats on your win!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/7/2013 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Vicky.
Date: 10/3/2013 2:02:00 PM
Way to go with this winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/7/2013 8:05:00 AM
Thanks Sara
Date: 10/3/2013 10:59:00 AM
great team work Richard, lovely win............SKAT
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/7/2013 8:04:00 AM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 10/3/2013 9:53:00 AM
you are amazing ! 7 and 7 ;)congratulations ! well deserved !
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/3/2013 10:17:00 AM
Thanks so much Yvette!
Date: 10/2/2013 6:55:00 PM
great collaboration between you both, congrats on your win :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/3/2013 8:00:00 AM
Thanks Sandra.
Date: 10/2/2013 3:24:00 PM
fantastic work and well deserved win. congrats to both. Nice teamwork. Love Colleen
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/3/2013 8:04:00 AM
Thanks Colleen, Hugs Rick
Date: 10/1/2013 8:23:00 PM
Hey, partner... :) Love the sound of that!! Congrats on this lovely win! :) We have Becca to thank for the suggestion that we work together in the first place! :) I must say....this dance had my twirling away to the music...Congrats!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/3/2013 8:04:00 AM
Could not have done it without you.
Date: 10/1/2013 3:23:00 PM
congrats on 2nd my team work contest Ty for entering Shadow x smile
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/1/2013 6:43:00 PM
Wow, thanks Shadow!
Date: 9/3/2013 7:24:00 AM
Thanks again Monterey.
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Date: 9/3/2013 4:57:00 AM
When two talented people collaborate the emotions just explode from the words and you reach new heights in the poetry,.
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Date: 9/1/2013 1:20:00 PM
Exceptionally moving and full of exquisite emotional disclosures. I thought it was just wonderful. Allan
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/2/2013 12:36:00 AM
Thanks so much Allan
Date: 9/1/2013 6:55:00 AM
You both captured a great moment here in this creative piece. Well done to you both!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/1/2013 8:26:00 AM
Thanks Mustapha
Date: 9/1/2013 1:02:00 AM
A great collaboration poem creatively penned by two great poets and dear friends of mine. Kudos to both of you! Thank you so much for sharing! If this is for the contest, i'm sure it'll do well. Thank you so much for your inspiring comments & everything my dear friend, Richard. Have a grace-filled weekend to you & your love ones. Love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/1/2013 8:27:00 AM
Thanks Leonora, you are a sweetheart.
Date: 8/31/2013 10:00:00 PM
:) Richard....a wonderful collaboration. It is an honor to have worked with someone who has been a source of encouragement to me from my early days on the soup. You encouraged me to join contests and believed in my work. Thank you for working with me! SOUP MAIL, please...some editing work needed! :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/31/2013 11:05:00 PM
Oh Richard...I forgive you....;-)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/31/2013 10:21:00 PM
Oops I meant Eileen.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/31/2013 10:14:00 PM
My pleasure Eillen, you are a talented writer and a good person.

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