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Dancing Cells

You come to me through breathing nuances of your soul Pinpricks of laughter, tears, and excitement Memories buried deep within Trickles of blood Moments of loss My body warms My heart expands I am a conduit To receive the gifts you bring Dancing cells before my eyes Seducing me with their movement Our beings so blessed with Magic and purpose We function, often without thought To the complexity of the mechanisms within That pump our hearts Containing light years of wisdom How precious life is How fortunate we are To feel bliss, love, anger, and loss We are capable of gazing into each other’s eyes With compassion and acceptance Able to feel the touch Of another’s lips on ours Miracles happen before our eyes We can grab a tendril, a tailfeather, A mane, or a hand And surf the wave to gratitude Anticipation ignites within my soul Understanding the delicate balance of nature Encompassing man, woman, child, and animals Brings welcome sweet tears to my eyes To receive the offerings of compassion, kindness, and humility And sharing them with others brings joy I am one We are one together All of us making our way Through darkness and light Fluttering monarch butterflies fill the air As we gather and rise upwards Riding the wings of the ancient bird tribes Unspoken words fill the gauzy lavender sky A pod of whales below guides us Gentle giants leading us towards Promise and new horizons Ushered by the heartbeats of wonder within

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Silpika Kalita

Date: 3/18/2024 2:11:00 PM

When there is the touch of spirituality, lines comes from the soul spontaneously. Here the contrast of darkness and light in the 3rd stanza is universal and uniformly narrates our true plight . The nature's imageries and their connection and impact is thoughtfully lingered from creation to personal touch and that's where the beauty of poem lies how it can amalgamates the true transformation

Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/23/2024 8:53:00 PM

Again dear Silpika , In gratitude for your presence. I appreciate you looking deeply within to comment and open your mind to the words within . Hugs , Susan :)

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 11/15/2023 10:36:00 AM

It is really beautiful.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/19/2023 8:06:00 AM

Thank you Paghunda! Happy for your visit .@ Susan :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 11/4/2023 1:29:00 AM

Dear Susan, I'm astounded by the way you've conveyed such detailed emotions within profound wordsmithery that actually feels like 'dancing cells'. You are a true wizard who knows how to make those lines glide in a perfect rhythm of precision and mellifluous pace. So much you've conveyed here about us humans, being One, making way through the darkness and light together.With understanding, compassion, empathy, love and genuineness, we can all rise above all the negative layers. Love that ending!

Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/13/2023 5:32:00 PM

Dear Hiya , your presence is a gift . I appreciate your wisdom and insight. We share so much as humans … pain, emotions , vulnerability and love. We are all one and yes, we all bleed the same color . Thank you for your heart and beautiful words . Big hugs, Susan :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/29/2023 3:03:00 PM

Hi Susan your thoughts which gather in your magnificent mind are truly a wonder ,relaying to us the readers on Poetry Soup, your colorful perspectives which are poignant and indeed such a pleasure to read. This poem is exceptional. Hugs and blessings my friend, Jennifer.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 10/2/2023 8:59:00 PM

Dear Jennifer, You bring a smile to my face with your words. Happy to have your visit and grateful for your presence ! Hugs and blessings to you dear one . Love, Susan :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2023 1:48:00 PM

How beautiful this is, dear. you are a poetess indeed.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/29/2023 11:01:00 AM

Thank you dear friend . Big hugs Andrea xx Susan :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/11/2023 10:36:00 AM

This was like travelling through your mind! In all its glorious venues. Thank you for a circular mind/ soul trip! Pangie x

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/11/2023 4:11:00 PM

Pangie, Hugs to you dear one !We are on this journey together and I couldn't be happier to have you along with me for the ride. Grateful for your presence .Susan xx :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/9/2023 2:08:00 PM

Susan, your poem was a work of art that transcended the boundaries of ordinary writing. It was as if each word flowed effortlessly from your pen, creating a masterpiece that exuded compassion and kindness. Within the pages of this poem, I found reasons to live, as the sentiments expressed were so deeply profound and heartfelt. Your talent knows no bounds, for not only do you possess a remarkable depth in your writing, but your perspectives are refreshingly unique and captivating to read. Your ability to effortlessly switch between different topics is awe-inspiring, but what truly brings your poetic gems to life is the pure and radiant essence of your golden heart and soul.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/10/2023 9:09:00 AM

Dearest Sotto Poet, I am speechless to respond to such kind and heartfelt words. To receive these words from you humbles me and honestly turned my eyes misty. I am beyond grateful. If I can touch one other person with my heart and words then I feel a sense of peace...even more importantly I feel a sense of connection. I feel that connection with you. In gratitude for you. A gift I will cherish always. Hugs and all good wishes, Susan :)

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/5/2023 6:27:00 AM

You are such a gifted writer dear Susan... I really missed your poems for so long... How well you expressed your gratitude for the gift of 'life',, being able feel and share all that life encompasses ...with your eloquent ink as always and I loved the title. Enjoy all the gifts in life bestowed upon you by God at this moment with your loved ones, dear friend. It's difficult to select one particular fav line. Excellent. Big Hugs... ~ Ani

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/10/2023 9:04:00 AM

Dear Ani..dear friend, What a gift and wonderful surprise to see you here ! I have missed you and your poems !! Life is so busy and yet the tranquility that is gained from putting words on the page speaks volumes . You are such a love and such a kind soul. Thank you for the gift of you. Thank you for your kind words. Looking forward to more of your poems. Love and hugs to you and the family, Susan:) xx

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/4/2023 12:14:00 PM

Lovely penning Susan, nice imagery and insightful line of thought too. Blessings,Gordon

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/10/2023 9:02:00 AM

Gordon, So happy to have your visit. Thank you for joining me on this ride . I appreciate your comments. Thank you. Blessings right back to you, Susan :)

Sally Eslinger

Date: 9/2/2023 11:56:00 AM

Thank you for all the Good, the hope & images, within this. Compassion and kindness, reasons to live, live within this poem. Enjoy your Labor Day!

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/3/2023 5:31:00 PM

Thank you dear Sally ! Big hugs to you and all good thoughts sent your way . In gratitude. Susan :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/2/2023 10:53:00 AM

This piece is a lovely tonic. I feel soothed after reading your words.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/3/2023 5:30:00 PM

Thank you Richard ! So peaceful your comments . Hugs, Susan :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/2/2023 9:23:00 AM

You have depth, you have originality, your perspectives are a delight to read, and finally you can write on such varying topics, but what brings all your poetic gems to life is your heart and soul Susan. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 9/3/2023 5:30:00 PM

Oh Jennifer - you have once again gifted my with your words . You humble me with you comments. I am in gratitude for your presence, heart and soul . Blessings and hugs right back to you ! Susan :)

Ink Empress

Date: 8/26/2023 8:03:00 AM

I love the flow of this very passionate and soulful write, and how descriptive you are , a love that is real and accepts various shades of life. Theres so many brilliant lines in this very eloquence write. But my most fave lines would be “ lavender sky” “we can grab a tendril tail feather” ah! Such captivating words woven in sheer poetic brilliance. Love this, Ink

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/29/2023 3:18:00 PM

Dear Ink Empress , Such a gift to have you visit ! Thank you for your passionate comments and letting me know what you liked. To journey together brings a smile . Sharing words emotions and thoughts is a joy . Hugs to you , Susan :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/19/2023 7:24:00 PM

This definitely took me on a journey, so whimsical and enchanting! Your writing style is so deeply eloquent and truly captivates the reader.. "We function, often without thought, to the complexity of the mechanisms within", "fluttering monarch butterflies fill the air... " Ahh, so many lines that I love here..There are myriad hues of different feelings here, purely embracing life and noticing the beauty of every moment..!

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/29/2023 3:14:00 PM

Dearest Hiya , what beautiful thoughtful lovely comments from you . Your eloquence on full display ! Thank you for taking notice of the little things .. the nuances with me . Thank you for letting me know what lines moved you . Wonderful to have you along for the journey . Hugs, Susan :)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/18/2023 5:20:00 PM

A beautiful ode to all that is good, beautiful and positive in life Susan: Your optimism shines like a guiding light. Stay wonderful. SuZ

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/29/2023 3:10:00 PM

Dear Suzanne, What a lovely comment which brings a smile to my face ! Sending big hugs and all good thoughts your way. Love, Susan :)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/17/2023 11:59:00 PM

The title says it all ~ dancing cells. To be grazed by divine magnetism manifesting ineffable rapture within, as we entwine with existence in fullness! A tremendous spiritual write as always, Susan. Thanks for sharing.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/29/2023 3:09:00 PM

Dear US , Your comment is extremely eloquent and I cherish your intelligence. Thank you for your presence! Blessings, Susan :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/17/2023 9:18:00 PM

You've captured the essence of how love uplifts us and colors our life, the beauty of the waves and lavender sky have cast quite a spell~

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/28/2023 11:31:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and lovely comments Michelle . So happy you enjoyed it . Susan :)

Silent One

Date: 8/16/2023 8:36:00 AM

How lovely is this.. your pen is so elegant and this is so romantic.. I could feel the connection of two souls and how they connect.. that is real love.. human touch is so beautiful, something we all crave for and desire.. without it, there is only loneliness.. so many lovely lines throughout your poem, I would find it hard to select only a few... great poetry.. nice to see you writing..

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/26/2023 7:59:00 AM

Dear SO, Such a gift to have you visit. Your comments fill me up and warm my spirit and heart . Thank you for you . I am always inspired by your poems, your depth of consciousness and your ability to paint emotions with your words. I agree the connection we feel with another soul is cherished . Hugs, Susan :)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/15/2023 2:00:00 PM

We are definitely blessed to be able to react and experience and share emotions in response to what is said or happens around us, dear Susan. Your poems always emit an aura of tenderness and positivity. ~ Warm regards & Hugs my friend // paul

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/23/2023 6:59:00 AM

Dear Paul, Your visits are always cherished . Simple pleasures and blessings abound each and every day if we pay attention and are open to them . Big hugs to you dear friend . Hoping you are smiling and enjoying every day . Love always, Susan :)

Bill Baker

Date: 8/15/2023 1:32:00 PM

Mindful poetry at its best, Susan. What a miracle, the creation of man. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/23/2023 6:37:00 AM

Big hugs dear friend Bill ! Love reading your insightful poetry which comes from your big heart and wise mind. Thanks for your visit . Susan :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/15/2023 10:32:00 AM

A poem I missed, but then God knows how many I missed when I was surrounded by useless nurses. Fine poetry is to be expected from you. The amalgamation of spiritual love. Wonderful.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/23/2023 6:35:00 AM

Dear Victor . To see you here again writing and commenting brings a smile to my face . I am glad the useless nurses have moved on ! In gratitude for your visit and comments. Write on ! Hugs, Susan :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/13/2023 6:09:00 AM

Dear Susan, Reading your poems is an experience of spirituality! "I am one We are one together All of us making our way Through darkness and light" - Love this, and all the lines, which render depth, magnificence, compassion, wisdom. Each of your poems brings something new, some beautiful revelation! Hugs ~ Mala

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/23/2023 6:34:00 AM

Dear Mala, Your presence is such a gift as is your mind , heart and insightful comments . A joy to have found you here ! Love always, Susan :)

Ts Poetry

Date: 8/12/2023 11:39:00 AM

The energy flows between the souls and we are here to feel all the little nuance in between

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/13/2023 8:20:00 AM

Yes what a gift to receive the nuances . In gratitude. Happy for your visit dear TS . Susan :)

Gary Radice

Date: 8/12/2023 2:15:00 AM

It's always a pleasure to journey and explore the world inside your words Susan. Your work has a 3D and surround sound quality to it. I've said it before somewhere but I'm saying it again having read this piece: Life's greatest prize is the prize of life itself. Cheers - Gary

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/13/2023 8:17:00 AM

Thank you dear Gary ! I love how you describe the sensations you feel while reading . Yes life is the prize and the journey is as well ! Hugs to you and all good wishes . I hope you are smiling . Susan ;)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/10/2023 3:13:00 PM

Such a touching piece in so many ways Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Lawrence
Date: 8/12/2023 10:10:00 PM

Dear Jan , Thank you for the gift of you ! Hugs , Susan :) xx