Dancing At Odd Intervals

I find myself
dancing alone
at odd intervals

I'm that girl 
the one 
with crazy dreams and a heart full of nails

I'm the girl no one knows
and if you listen real close
you might figure out this is all a dream

something make believe
I created
and if I erase myself out
will you put yourself in?

I'm sure you have all these lies to tell about my soul
and if you pay attention you could learn something
about
dancing with yourself at odd intervals you could be the person nobody knows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/14/2013 4:49:00 PM
Very good!
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Jamie Anderson
Date: 4/4/2013 11:19:00 PM
Thank ya!
Date: 2/27/2013 1:33:00 PM
dancing at odd intervals...I just love that!...sprinkled with pain
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Date: 2/27/2013 4:05:00 AM
- I take a dance with you, Jamie ..... a really good poem, you write well. - Welcome to P-Soup! - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your thoughts and poems here with us. - I want to read more from you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Jamie Anderson
Date: 4/4/2013 11:18:00 PM
Thank you :)
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