Dancing Among Thorns

The secret garden 
with flowers of the wilderness 
shall ignite with vibrance
amongst the weeds.
Soft petals dance with chaos
and I'm the boldest.
Spotlight on me,
a cacophony of laughter,
a splash of colour
against the grey.

I am shattered,
while vigorous,
yet the last one dancing
under a broken sky.
Where my ideas spiral
like rust shaded autumn leaves,
Whirling…Twisting
within the gusts of my mind
struggling against the currents of despair.

I wear my pain like a crown of thorns,
each sting a reminder
of battles fought.
The ripples of my laughter
mask the screams
hiding the shadows,
lurking within
the weight of my illness -
heavy yet so well-known,
A ghost I’ve learnt to dance with.

In this garden,
I shed my layers.
The world recedes and I am myself - 
a girl with tears 
who proclaims delight
and sorrow.
One who waltzes through the madness,
embracing chaos that completes me.

In the crudeness,
I shall find my truth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Agustin Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 9:40 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Seeker Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 11:31 AM
Absolutely loved this verse, great lance of introspection and self-contemplation
Tilley Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 1:58 AM
Thank you so much!
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