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Dancing Among Thorns

The secret garden with flowers of the wilderness shall ignite with vibrance amongst the weeds. Soft petals dance with chaos and I'm the boldest. Spotlight on me, a cacophony of laughter, a splash of colour against the grey. I am shattered, while vigorous, yet the last one dancing under a broken sky. Where my ideas spiral like rust shaded autumn leaves, Whirling…Twisting within the gusts of my mind struggling against the currents of despair. I wear my pain like a crown of thorns, each sting a reminder of battles fought. The ripples of my laughter mask the screams hiding the shadows, lurking within the weight of my illness - heavy yet so well-known, A ghost I’ve learnt to dance with. In this garden, I shed my layers. The world recedes and I am myself - a girl with tears who proclaims delight and sorrow. One who waltzes through the madness, embracing chaos that completes me. In the crudeness, I shall find my truth.

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Date: 9/30/2024 9:40:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/28/2024 11:31:00 AM
Absolutely loved this verse, great lance of introspection and self-contemplation
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Lauren Tilley
Date: 9/29/2024 1:58:00 AM
Thank you so much!

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