Dancing

We will dance all night and into the early morning
We forgot our outfits and we have nothing to wear
We will wear our shower caps and chicken coats instead
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 5:07 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Destiny. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Mac Donald Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 9:42 AM
Chicken coats sound itchy?
Mac Donald Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 9:40 AM
Well oh well, you disappeared into thin air.:( You're a funny bunny (),,()
Mac Donald Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 9:36 AM
Oh well, I kept commenting on a blank named somebunny "Who is Online", after the third comment (none showed up), this piece opened..lol Hmmm.."shower caps and chicken coats" would be great for a masquerade ball? Not my kinda garb though.<(*)..bock
Ruiz Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 9:34 AM
who's that dancing all night into the early morning wearing shower caps and chicken coats just in case it was raining? I hope you don't mind. You had a good idea for a poem... but don't state the obvious and add a little more to the soup. ~Anna
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