Dancing

dancing with my devil's past,
i start thinking about the bad
things i don't want to remember
its been another long day
words racing around in my head 
makes it impossible to sleep 
so i get up and walk around
i think I've finally reached my limit
all walls have fallen before me
glass from the mirror lays broken
and my hands bleed from the cuts
the phone rings
and its more bad news to add to the stress
my eyes swell and i begin to cry
here comes the thought
"just die"
around in circles i dance
the sounds from my radio plays in the background
but i have too much to think about 
to actually hear it
i'll dance it off
my aggression will soon disappear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/12/2013 1:06:00 PM
That explains the dark glasses, hiding your sad eyes. This was a powerful and moving piece. You have a way with your words.
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Date: 9/4/2010 1:59:00 PM
Doing something can we enjoy can sure take away the blues, nice write and dancing is kool >> James
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Date: 7/3/2010 11:53:00 AM
I like how the poem begins and the ending. Dancing will certainly take away the aggression and instill peace in the mind. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 7/2/2010 5:35:00 PM
Very emotive and expressive write..I hope not your life but just the topic of living with the guilt of past mistakes..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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