Notes About The Poem

Dancin' Easy

Sue jived to tremendous applause Then pondered what could be the cause She’d got dressed in a rush So her cute peachy tush Revealed she'd not put on her drawers!! 12~21~16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Smith Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 9:30 AM
So Ummmm their dancing in the moonlight.. ;-) Too funny Jan!!
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 3:56 PM
ha ha ha great comment Arlene! Happy new year:-) hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 9:03 PM
I always miss the good shows!!! :) SO cute!
Allison Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 6:56 AM
ha ha ha looks like everything was on show that night lol:-) hugs jan xx
Horne Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 2:13 PM
LMAO - thanks for the laughs
Allison Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 4:35 PM
Thanks for all your support Jack:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 11:46 PM
I guess she was dancing cheek to cheek...:-) .. Nice limerick Jan
Allison Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
That comment is hilari'arse' Joseph!!!!:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 8:43 PM
Awesome, Jan. You have become a master at them. REmember when you could not even figure out the meter a long time ago?
Allison Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I've come a long way since i wrote my first poem on 26th November 2013:-) Have learned so much from wonderful poets like YOU:-) hugs jan xx
Murray Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 1:29 PM
Wish I had written this Jan. So good.
Allison Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 6:23 PM
My mum's name is Barbara ... I told her tomorrow she is going to be a windy old bag lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Murray Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 5:43 PM
Hurricane Barbara...I heard. We will just have to batten down the hatches Jan. Merry Xmas.
Allison Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 1:32 PM
aww Jean you are too kind - I do worry about my muse - hubby and I were on a walk and lines 1 2 and 5 came to me so i had to get a till receipt and scribble it down before it disappeared from my mind... wont be walking next few days the forecast is dire!:-( hugs Jan xx
Trifiatis Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 5:24 AM
She deserved the applause dear, Jan! Haha! I am smiling thinking of ... Excellent!
Allison Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 1:05 PM
Thanks so much Demetrios and Happy Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx
Hoffman Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 8:26 PM
Lol, talk about a draft! Funny stuff Jan!:)
Allison Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 1:05 PM
Thanks Cheryl:-):-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 6:14 PM
you are too funny, jan! this one is a gem!
Allison Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 1:06 PM
aww thanks Ilene I do enjoy writing humourous poems:-):-) hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 2:53 PM
hilarious Jan love it hugs merry Christmas hugs
Allison Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 1:06 PM
Glad you enjoyed Shadow:-) have a wonderful Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx
Vinson Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 2:12 PM
Ha! Cheers, Jan. Those were the days... : )
Allison Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 1:07 PM
ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Oops...poor Sue
Allison Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 1:07 PM
LOL:-)thanks Tim :-) hugs Jan xx
Turner Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 9:41 AM
Must have been some dance:) Merry Christmas Jan:)
Allison Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 1:07 PM
I wonder if it's ever happened Daniel lol:-):-) hugs Jan xx
Green Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 9:30 AM
Ha, this was cute and funny Jan. She spun on the floor with such flair As we stood helpless only to stare Then her skirt moved above And each man fell in love For what she’d forgotten to wear :)
Allison Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 1:08 PM
ha ha great reply Chris:-) have a wonderful time over the festive period:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 9:29 AM
Ha, Jan. I see your sense of humor is alive and well.
Allison Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 1:09 PM
ohhhhh Lin welcome back have missed you!!! I am still trying with the humour:-) hugs jan xx
Flats Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 9:11 AM
What she forgot will never be forgotten! O U silly girl U;-). Huggabugs! ~ j
Allison Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 1:09 PM
ha ha ha great comment John:-) Happy Christmas:-) hugs jan xx
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace